Another worlds with system

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Stand_TheWorld777

first of all thank you for this chapter. I honestly enjoyed reading your novel, but this confused me with the use of punctuation during conversations, for example, too ambiguous, so it was quite difficult to read. The lack of purpose / explanation mc get the system, and why the mc was condemned when the initial story is not mentioned whether mc is only entertainment for gods / others so that makes me confused. The rest is nice and entertaining.

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Suzuha_Yuu

-um how about using " " for talking instead of the - and if there thinking use ' ' if there using telepathy ( ) -the name of arturia is always changing -the spaces are a bit too far to sentences -i dont know how the system works is the system gonna froze the world he goes like sao and konusoba and go back there if he wants to or not? -add some kind of status,skill and equipment chapter for arturia and the mc -i dont even know whats the reason system adding new stuff on the world like the dungeon,monster and skill (i probably forget it or its not added on the story)

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Steven_Beck_5008

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Daoist204928

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