Chapter 1: Quick info

Ok so. This is my first novel and it's a Cinderella story with an Islamic twist. It centers around a muslim protagonist and has many many references to Islam and Islamic culture. I am not serious about publishing it here and so may delete it but I am about writing this so please do not leave Islamophobic comments. If you're gonna hate on the writing, give me constructive criticism that has to do with the style not content.