Ruler of Order and Chaos

Writing Quality 4/5 stars The quality of writing is very good but there are a few typos that could be fixed by writing it on something like Microsoft Word that has both a spell check and a grammar check Stability of uploading 5/5 stars From the time when I first put this book in my library to today there has maybe been a day that there was no chapter uploaded and they are chapters of decent length not a lot of1000 word chapters in a single day, but a single couple thousand word chapter a day Story development 4/5 stars It’s about average in terms of the way the story goes where the main character gets a system and uses it to travel between worlds but this beats the average novel in how it is done. The main character starts off in a world that I have never seen before in a FanFiction (Battle Through The Heavens) and I really enjoy the change of pace I am really used to seeing FanFictions in worlds like One Piece, Naruto, Bleach, Against The Gods, Danmachi, or other mainstream popular anime or Chinese novel. The main character doesn’t just kill the original protagonist of the original story just because he is the original protagonist, instead befriending him without realising that he was the original protagonist. All in all not the best but certainly better then the average you will see on Webnovel. Character design 4/5 stars The main character is mostly unique in that he doesn’t have a 2 foot long schlong just “well endowed” also the main character isn’t a fucking horny idiot that jumps at any chance to get some ass. The system isn’t some mindless screen thats only purpose is to make sure the main character doesn’t become a father at age 14. It is an actual sentient thing that actually helps the main character solve some of his issues which is also why I put it under character design. The 2 goddesses are also unique in that they don’t just throw themselves onto the mc’s dick during their first meeting, instead even going as far as one of them trying to kill him because of her pride disagreeing with the fact that she has been crippled and enslaved by a “lowly human.” The Fairy Doctor (Yi Xian) given some form or character development but she teeters on the line of generic xianxia female #1 falling in love with the main character after she and he rape each other after being hit by some aphrodisiac potion (that his master made) in a panic trying to defend himself from her attempt to silence him after he was getting to close to finding out a secret cave that she wanted to keep hidden. However only after watching the mc go mad due to the fact that because of her special constitution she would die did she accept her feelings for him. World background 4/5 stars It is completely average in regards to the fact that in his original world the background explained was satisfactory, not great by any standards of the word but it gave us enough information that I didn’t have to try to piece together what Legend_Chan was trying to say whenever he wrote something. It was much like an info dump about the world as we were learning about the world we were in at the same time as the main character was. Another good thing is that we were not given too much information that we would not remember it all, it was just enough to learn about where we were and the basic cultivation levels but not too much as to spoil the entire story before hand. Another good thing is that the 2 goddesses didn’t spoil anything about the true endgame levels. However when the first world travel cane we the readers were expected to mostly understand the world background of the story Battle Through The Heavens. Now I’m not saying that it is a bad thing that this is done as I’ve grown accustomed to it as nearly all FanFictions do this as well. Overall rating 4.2/5 stars This is one of the best stories that I have read so far, not being perfect In almost all the categories but still being above average in all of them. All in all I would recommend.

It's a really great book although it still has room for improvement the author makes up for it with effort. It's impressive seeing an author who builds up more than one Mc in a book. Good luck and keep it up.