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I LOVE THIS BOOK! the characters are very enjoyable and I am also a fan of D&D and this book gives me so many ideas for a campaign and characters, so thank you for writing this book it is amazing
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I saw up to chapter 40 but I'm really enjoying the work more so I just hope it's the kind of work that the MC matures because it's very annoying that he starts naive and infatile and continues like this
ruined a good storey in chapter 75. highly disappointing....zzzzzzzzzzzzzxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
From reading the synopsis, I thought this would be a dark-fantasy with a brutal main lead, but you get the opposite. The story feels like a Disney movie. A character that hesitates to kill a bug, and a system that talks with the main character like she's his mother, the whole thing feels really weird. I read books for the purpose of seeing something interesting, not life lessons on how killing is bad, and how you should always avoid hurting others. The story skips along very weirdly, from random power boosts to scenarios that shouldn't happen given the current powers of the main character, but they do, which is fine if they at least make sense.
Bad and stupid. Grammar and everything is still good but the story itself doesn't make any sense. Characters behave weirdly and sometimes there's hardly any development and sometimes an important development is crammed into one chapter. You can try reading for the power system but that too is nothing special and is very slow to develop.
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is the mc evil cold hearted willing to do whatever it takes become the strongest or this is one of those novels where the mc is naiive kind and fall in love withe every girl he meet and will stand against the world for someone he just met i trully hate the second type cz it a little bit hypocryte maan this is w orld whe the stong eats the weak u have no right but perish if ur weak
I just started reading a few days ago, and I already caught up to the last chapter so far. All I can say is I'm loving the story and the world background, of course there is tiny issues with the grammar like "his, her, he, and she, but other than that its not a big deal cause the story makes up for the rest. 9.5/10
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I could read till the chapter 40. It's so slower than i could endure. But other than the slow building, mc's behaviors and the dialogs between him, granny and that little girl made me drop it. I felt like i was reading dora or something. He claims or aims that he is the predator but before killing the bugs he feels sorry. Granny teaches him that every life is important so he shouldn't kill anyone. Their interactions made me think that this novel's a slice of life and they will always go to the forest to picnic, especially that unnecessary goodwill and etiquette. I think I'm over the age of learning how to thank for every damn thing. Mc has the potential to be a Japanese beta mc. Those are my thoughts, sorry if any of this offended you.
Granny and Nº3 suddenly can create worlds overnight for them to train and explore. That is forced as fvck, the story was ok up until that point.
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Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ Why author don't delete spam with 5 stars and threat people who give low score with their lawyers?
After reading the synopsis and finding out that there is no light at the end of the tunnel I should have noticed it for the foreshadowing that it was. Which to be honest is confusing because the MC goes on to tell me otherwise not two seconds later. Conceptually, the story is there. The writing quality is decent, the grammar at a wonderfully refreshing level when surrounded by some of the alphabet soup that is on the site. For that, I can't fault it. Unfortunately, besides the story idea and the quality of grammar. The story is incredibly slow to start. Our MC who is basically a potato who without his handy Internal (AI) companion at the start isn't great. Between his own inner dialogue and the Internal companion force-feeding him his every action, there are massive blocks of text that make you feel like the mushroom bugs the Mc first becomes. Sadly at times, it seems like he isn't the hero of his own story and just a side character to the events that are happening around him. Then in a whirlwind of plot armour, our clueless MC goes from blob to bug, from food to finally an ancient dragon in the form of an overpowered little boy so quickly that even he doesn't have a clue what is happening. And His opponents are cardboard cutouts that are there to drive his story. They offer no real threat or feeling of suspense. But that's just me rambling. Overall the story has great potential and a large amount of content with stable enough releases to feed your inner bibliophile.
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I'm giving a low score both for the quality of the story and for the author being a snowflake when receiving criticism......................................
Its readable but not void of problems. Writing quality is good, development is also good, world background is kinda weird. It gives off a sense of mystery. The only downside as I see it is the MC and his system. MC is somewhat similar to beta MCs youll see in anime. I get that it is to leave room for development but this one is somehow inconsistent with his rationale. The system on the other hand, is a typical manipulator. Manipulating the MC for what it believes is the best for MC. Id like an MC that makes his own choices not one being lead around. Also, at early chapters the author is using the system too much in His/Her world building plan. Like everytime the MC discovers something he just asks. There should be a better way to go around this.
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This novel can be summarized in one word... Frustrating The mc has mind of a child throughout... unable to make decisions for himself... the system is his nanny...constantly telling him what to do This story has a main character but no protagonist... reason being he has no goals, no desires, no intent to interact with the world... only waits for system objectives The story setting is for kids... fights are skipped... no moral dilemmas... no consent for mc foolishness... no challenges for mc to overcome without system helping This is barely even a novel... after all novels have stories to tell All it took to ruin the premise was the mc's personality, system's continued meddling, constant children's theme and worst of all lack of any direction to the story despite being... Chapter 67 My overview... nice premise but no payoff...be prepared to have questions and no answers ad infinitum... just frustrating
I LOVE THIS BOOK! the characters are very enjoyable and I am also a fan of D&D and this book gives me so many ideas for a campaign and characters, so thank you for writing this book it is amazing
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I saw up to chapter 40 but I'm really enjoying the work more so I just hope it's the kind of work that the MC matures because it's very annoying that he starts naive and infatile and continues like this
ruined a good storey in chapter 75. highly disappointing....zzzzzzzzzzzzzxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
From reading the synopsis, I thought this would be a dark-fantasy with a brutal main lead, but you get the opposite. The story feels like a Disney movie. A character that hesitates to kill a bug, and a system that talks with the main character like she's his mother, the whole thing feels really weird. I read books for the purpose of seeing something interesting, not life lessons on how killing is bad, and how you should always avoid hurting others. The story skips along very weirdly, from random power boosts to scenarios that shouldn't happen given the current powers of the main character, but they do, which is fine if they at least make sense.
Bad and stupid. Grammar and everything is still good but the story itself doesn't make any sense. Characters behave weirdly and sometimes there's hardly any development and sometimes an important development is crammed into one chapter. You can try reading for the power system but that too is nothing special and is very slow to develop.
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is the mc evil cold hearted willing to do whatever it takes become the strongest or this is one of those novels where the mc is naiive kind and fall in love withe every girl he meet and will stand against the world for someone he just met i trully hate the second type cz it a little bit hypocryte maan this is w orld whe the stong eats the weak u have no right but perish if ur weak
I just started reading a few days ago, and I already caught up to the last chapter so far. All I can say is I'm loving the story and the world background, of course there is tiny issues with the grammar like "his, her, he, and she, but other than that its not a big deal cause the story makes up for the rest. 9.5/10
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I could read till the chapter 40. It's so slower than i could endure. But other than the slow building, mc's behaviors and the dialogs between him, granny and that little girl made me drop it. I felt like i was reading dora or something. He claims or aims that he is the predator but before killing the bugs he feels sorry. Granny teaches him that every life is important so he shouldn't kill anyone. Their interactions made me think that this novel's a slice of life and they will always go to the forest to picnic, especially that unnecessary goodwill and etiquette. I think I'm over the age of learning how to thank for every damn thing. Mc has the potential to be a Japanese beta mc. Those are my thoughts, sorry if any of this offended you.
Granny and Nº3 suddenly can create worlds overnight for them to train and explore. That is forced as fvck, the story was ok up until that point.
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Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ Why author don't delete spam with 5 stars and threat people who give low score with their lawyers?
After reading the synopsis and finding out that there is no light at the end of the tunnel I should have noticed it for the foreshadowing that it was. Which to be honest is confusing because the MC goes on to tell me otherwise not two seconds later. Conceptually, the story is there. The writing quality is decent, the grammar at a wonderfully refreshing level when surrounded by some of the alphabet soup that is on the site. For that, I can't fault it. Unfortunately, besides the story idea and the quality of grammar. The story is incredibly slow to start. Our MC who is basically a potato who without his handy Internal (AI) companion at the start isn't great. Between his own inner dialogue and the Internal companion force-feeding him his every action, there are massive blocks of text that make you feel like the mushroom bugs the Mc first becomes. Sadly at times, it seems like he isn't the hero of his own story and just a side character to the events that are happening around him. Then in a whirlwind of plot armour, our clueless MC goes from blob to bug, from food to finally an ancient dragon in the form of an overpowered little boy so quickly that even he doesn't have a clue what is happening. And His opponents are cardboard cutouts that are there to drive his story. They offer no real threat or feeling of suspense. But that's just me rambling. Overall the story has great potential and a large amount of content with stable enough releases to feed your inner bibliophile.
Reveal Spoiler I'm giving a low score both for the quality of the story and for the author being a snowflake when receiving criticism......................................
Its readable but not void of problems. Writing quality is good, development is also good, world background is kinda weird. It gives off a sense of mystery. The only downside as I see it is the MC and his system. MC is somewhat similar to beta MCs youll see in anime. I get that it is to leave room for development but this one is somehow inconsistent with his rationale. The system on the other hand, is a typical manipulator. Manipulating the MC for what it believes is the best for MC. Id like an MC that makes his own choices not one being lead around. Also, at early chapters the author is using the system too much in His/Her world building plan. Like everytime the MC discovers something he just asks. There should be a better way to go around this.
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This novel can be summarized in one word... Frustrating The mc has mind of a child throughout... unable to make decisions for himself... the system is his nanny...constantly telling him what to do This story has a main character but no protagonist... reason being he has no goals, no desires, no intent to interact with the world... only waits for system objectives The story setting is for kids... fights are skipped... no moral dilemmas... no consent for mc foolishness... no challenges for mc to overcome without system helping This is barely even a novel... after all novels have stories to tell All it took to ruin the premise was the mc's personality, system's continued meddling, constant children's theme and worst of all lack of any direction to the story despite being... Chapter 67 My overview... nice premise but no payoff...be prepared to have questions and no answers ad infinitum... just frustrating