The Beginning but also the End
As the gods pushed him off the edge Shiro slowly and gently fell into the abyss a realm of nothing but death. As he came to accept his fate the ring on his finger started to glow blinding all as he entered the abyss...
NOTE: This is the first chapter of my first novel I would appreciate any and all critiques and pointers to help me improve the story, in the future if anyone has any ideas for the novel I would appreciate it if you could tell me so I can see what people want, I will try to read all comments and reviews. And most importantly I will try to improve! Also there is no beginning because we all know it comes after the end :) Will be looking for a cover art soon.
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