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A Person was transported to One Piece... What Could Happen
Grammar is very bad... I think... Just bear with it... Thanks.
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Just a copy of one piece with an MC that wants to watch ..... .....................................................................................
Just read chapter one. No MC development apart from his system. Some hopes and dreams about the OP world would have been nice. Maybe some inner monologue about how he made his choices from the system at the very least. The system seems too helpful; he gained a lot of freebies which weren't well considered. The Sharingan, for example, is kind of defunct in a world where observation Haki lets you predict enemy attacks anyway..
warning a generic fanfic don't bother reading this, its a generic fanfic all plot is same as canon he can kill one of the plot villain but he didn't because thw author can only follow canon he's basically luffy's nany the author should put a warning that this is too much canon rehash
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It was pretty good but im sad to see no more updates, but thank you for giving me something to spend my free time reading yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
not bad hopefully it will be updated again soon, can't wait. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .,..................
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Not gonna lie, I think that the author just wants an OP mc and doesn't care how he does it, there are already so many forced plots that I have seen within the first few chapters, I do think it has potential but the execution overall is poor. There are some plots that cannot be explained, some plots that were not explained and some that doesn't make sense, however this is just my honest review please don't take it too harshly on yourself if you feel that I am roasting you then no, It is your fanfic after all and you can make as much changes to canon as you can and I am just a reader giving my honest opinion.
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so far the story is goodโบโบโบ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐keep up the good work and please don't drop the story
System slave MC. The MC does nothing if the system does not order it. In addition, he has not changed anything in history to await the straw hats on the Mermaid's island. What's the use of beating someone up if he comes back to **** you? The MC threw a Getsuga Tenshou in the face of Holdy and didn't kill him, just so the plot with luffy happened. The same with the situation of the mermaid princess. If you're not going to change a fucking story, it's not a fanfic, it's just a damn copy of the canonical plot with a ghost following everything. The guy has the potential to blow up this planet with a sneeze if he knows how to take advantage of the system, but was thinking about following an idiot weaker than himself because of the plot. I hate this garbage
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