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After a horrible experience, Tom begins his new life in Vyndra. It is a new planet with a peculiar way of life than what you were used to. It is not only inhabited by human beings but by other alien species and virtual creatures that swarm in the network.
Being a Gifted, he must serve his species, being nothing more than a child. He only follows what they show, but he will try to find his place and a goal to move forward.
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Story plot is really good as well as the writing and pace of the story. Although more details about the characters will enhance the story but over all its wonderful read.. I think synopsis should have been a bit more descriptive so that it hooks up the reader. But keep up the good work dear author.:)
Your plot is interesting. Writing style is good and your choice of words is amazing. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Keep writing!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
You really made an interesting plot. Although there are mispled words and some grammatical errors. But overall it was a nice story. I hope you continue writing bro.
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This novel,while with a rather generic story, is well executed. The grammar needs some work, there's also issues with how the sentences flow. Characters are defined and have their distinct personality, but sometimes they feel a bit 2-dimensional. Maybe it will be developped in later chapters? To conclude, this novel has promises if the author adresses the points raised in this review.
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The idea of this novel is very unique and the plot is unlike anything I've ever read before. The synopsis also made me feel curious. Overall, I believe there needs to be an improvement in your writing but you have great potential. Keep writing!