/ Fantasy / The Lion's Gift
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Death? It comes to everyone.
Darkness? An old friend.
Monsters? Most are misunderstood, and even those that aren't are easily diverted.
Enemies? A good challenge.
Other human beings? Vile, wretched creatures, best to stay away from them.
Meet Vivienne Raji, a cynical high-schooler who has built thousands of masks and lots of strength to protect herself, those close to her, and anything in need of protection.
"I am not afraid of loving someone, no. Neither am I afraid of their betrayal of my trust, no, not that either. I am immensely terrified of what I will do to the one who betrays my trust, as I will be blinded by anger, and my actions will forever weigh on my conscious. "
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Extremely good for someone who wants to read a fantasy mixed with romance feels! Another one, the synopsis is a bit long, but it's okay, you can make it short! Yeah, the readers gonna be hooked at this novel!
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural, the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, as I read a few lines earlier in the beginning, it made me wonder what caused Vivienne (quite unique name by the way, I love unique names) father to be hated so much? Was it cause of her gift? Would they still be a target? And boom, we are in highschool, it had a little fast paced method to it(look at me criticising, I am a victim but now that I wanna edit my stories, please remember this point as I was pointed out on this flaw too, so I'm no better. Ok?), readers could be sidetracked on the motive of the story and might be able to guess the remaining scenes as author's block could set it. This is a Webnovel platform, and the longer the better so look for those beautiful thoughts which run in your mind and continue to wow us readers with your descriptive , brain tasking, non cliche stories. The prologue preferably talks either about the past or the future which would leave readers anticipating more well that's if they are into a particular genre. Going to well, the very first real chapter: Water Bottle reflexes, I guess no one needs to be told what would be in it, I could suggest putting up something which couldn't be predictable and please the reflex action displayed not at the beginning of the chapter, you could probably describe the school, her brief interaction with people, if she was bullied at the moment, she felt a tingling sensation, blah blah blah (I guess I blab too much ) Wow didn't expect to write this long, this should be by far the longest Review I've done on Webnovel, but since I personally love Fantasy novels! I showed interest and clearly the fact you're just starting, you could incorporate my blabs 😅 and I do apologise if I sounded rude while commenting 🙏🏻 it was never intentional. All being said, keep up the good work.
I'd like to comment on the chapter first which is extremely relatable, the type of writing most author's want to create these days. As for the synopsis, I think it's too long. Most reader's don't read these long synopsis so I think you should make it a bit short. Your description is very good and to the point, which keeps the reader hooked in for more. Overall, it's extremely good. Keep up the good work!!
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It's been a great experience reading this book. Good work author. Keep it up. Updates r frequent which is good. I loved the characters. Added to my library. Recommended.
I love this book and I can not wait to see what happens next Vee is really my favorite in this book she is really magnificent,her strong nature is something I love and I love that she is not plastic she is amazing. The author is really talented