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The start was a bit convoluted and didn't flow as smoothly as I'm expecting. The story is pretty bland, I don't hate formulaic stories but I do hate boring ones. For a novel about VRgames to work, it ne3ds good dialogue, it's hard so I don't mind switching it with some comic relief. All we got are BS quests, MC's first day he got a B rank for his first quest, then a Village quest, then an S rank quest. I don't mind an action packed beginning, but this is just way too much.
I've only read up to chapter 45 so my review may be inaccurate but so far the story has been great ๐ ๐ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp]
This novel is probably one of the best on webnovel, but is on hiatus. It is a great story and the only problem would be the minor grammar mistakes. And you can check the other reviews if you want, cause all of them are 4 and more stars.
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Iโm giving this novel a max rating in the hopes that it garners more attention. It has almost perfect English and is well-written with few plotholes, yet itโs less popular a lot of the complete garbage. Itโs not perfect, but for what its worth, I feel safe in calling this a hidden gem
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this book is honestly a masterpiece on webnovel. honestly, I don't even know why this isn't on the top ranking books. the story development is wonderfully paced, with enjoyable plot turns and you can clearly see that the author tried his 100% in every chapter. this is a must read for any1 who even remotely liked anime like overlord.
Any romance here? ......................................... ............................................................. .
The story's coming along quite nicely! I'd give this a 5 stars, plus the author's making such a great novel free to read, something I definitely appreciate. :^)
I am really enjoying the story so far, it definitely deserves more attention for how good it is. The writing quality is great and the overall world of the story is very interesting.
Well, the author says they heard a rumor, so here is your 5 stars ................................................................
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I don't like it. The whole reincarnation failed and soul fusion feels unneeded for the plot. You can write this story even without it. It serves the purpose of explaining why MC can more or less break world of game and do things others can't. The battle of human vs monster is a long proces and dodging and attacking is very detailed. I don't like it but I guess it depends on reader taste. ( I can't help but feel this book would be more if there was no reincarnation at all, just a player that is talented). I would give it a 2.5* but since its free and author is hard working giving it a 3.6*.
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Some minor grammar and spelling mistakes, but overall, a great and addicting story. I binged all the chapters in a day, I loved it so much. Keep up the good work.
5 star for a generous author ................................................................................................................
This review is coming after chapter 201 came out and all I have to say is that this is gold.................................................
Fantastic novel all around. Probably the best pure mmorpg novel i've read. It takes everything from novels like Strongest sword god, great thief and virtually every other mmorpg based novel and does everything better.
First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long. TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels. Now for the real review (contains spoilers): Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short. Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like โman goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal. Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic โmom.โ We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in โremember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.โ While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall. World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel. Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.
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This novel is criminally underrated, It is truly tragic a lot of trash novels occupy the top 200 leaderboards but that's Webnovel. I enjoy everything from the macho mc to the fact that he isn't afraid to show off his own achievements.
Please dont drop this. This is a hidden gem. I still dont know why its not on the leaderboards but this novel is really good. Kudos to the author for having a good plot and grammer. Just a suggestion tho. For me i keep looking at the chapter titles, so please make a more interesting title for each chapter, titles are boring but contents of each chapter is really goooooddd. thanks for the daily updates bro! Keep it up!
Good novel go read it, dont read the review go read this amazing novel, go, go u fucking bastard GOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
The start was a bit convoluted and didn't flow as smoothly as I'm expecting. The story is pretty bland, I don't hate formulaic stories but I do hate boring ones. For a novel about VRgames to work, it ne3ds good dialogue, it's hard so I don't mind switching it with some comic relief. All we got are BS quests, MC's first day he got a B rank for his first quest, then a Village quest, then an S rank quest. I don't mind an action packed beginning, but this is just way too much.
I've only read up to chapter 45 so my review may be inaccurate but so far the story has been great ๐ ๐ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp]
This novel is probably one of the best on webnovel, but is on hiatus. It is a great story and the only problem would be the minor grammar mistakes. And you can check the other reviews if you want, cause all of them are 4 and more stars.
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Iโm giving this novel a max rating in the hopes that it garners more attention. It has almost perfect English and is well-written with few plotholes, yet itโs less popular a lot of the complete garbage. Itโs not perfect, but for what its worth, I feel safe in calling this a hidden gem
Finding a free book that is well written and very entertaining is a rarity this days.. Keep up the good work author.. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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this book is honestly a masterpiece on webnovel. honestly, I don't even know why this isn't on the top ranking books. the story development is wonderfully paced, with enjoyable plot turns and you can clearly see that the author tried his 100% in every chapter. this is a must read for any1 who even remotely liked anime like overlord.
Any romance here? ......................................... ............................................................. .
The story's coming along quite nicely! I'd give this a 5 stars, plus the author's making such a great novel free to read, something I definitely appreciate. :^)
I am really enjoying the story so far, it definitely deserves more attention for how good it is. The writing quality is great and the overall world of the story is very interesting.
Well, the author says they heard a rumor, so here is your 5 stars ................................................................
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I don't like it. The whole reincarnation failed and soul fusion feels unneeded for the plot. You can write this story even without it. It serves the purpose of explaining why MC can more or less break world of game and do things others can't. The battle of human vs monster is a long proces and dodging and attacking is very detailed. I don't like it but I guess it depends on reader taste. ( I can't help but feel this book would be more if there was no reincarnation at all, just a player that is talented). I would give it a 2.5* but since its free and author is hard working giving it a 3.6*.
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Some minor grammar and spelling mistakes, but overall, a great and addicting story. I binged all the chapters in a day, I loved it so much. Keep up the good work.
5 star for a generous author ................................................................................................................
This review is coming after chapter 201 came out and all I have to say is that this is gold.................................................
Fantastic novel all around. Probably the best pure mmorpg novel i've read. It takes everything from novels like Strongest sword god, great thief and virtually every other mmorpg based novel and does everything better.
First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long. TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels. Now for the real review (contains spoilers): Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short. Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like โman goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal. Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic โmom.โ We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in โremember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.โ While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall. World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel. Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.
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This novel is criminally underrated, It is truly tragic a lot of trash novels occupy the top 200 leaderboards but that's Webnovel. I enjoy everything from the macho mc to the fact that he isn't afraid to show off his own achievements.
Please dont drop this. This is a hidden gem. I still dont know why its not on the leaderboards but this novel is really good. Kudos to the author for having a good plot and grammer. Just a suggestion tho. For me i keep looking at the chapter titles, so please make a more interesting title for each chapter, titles are boring but contents of each chapter is really goooooddd. thanks for the daily updates bro! Keep it up!
Good novel go read it, dont read the review go read this amazing novel, go, go u fucking bastard GOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.