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Chapter 3: Revival of the ten commandments

[AN:I was so pleasantly surprised when i realized that 12 people already have this book in their library,i've had this idea for a while,but planned to put it in action after i had read the manga and understood the whole plot instead of having just watched all four seasons,but after reading a seven deadly sins fan-fic which just focused on romance and only hinted at the plot so the readers know where it is in the story line,i decided to just write it anyway,so since 12 people already have it,i've decided to write three more chapters for today]

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while the ten commandments were talking with each other after having a delicious meal made by luna,hendrickson was trying to unseal them with fraudrin at the side,and when the seal weakened zeldris and the others immediately escaped,when they came out,fraudrin welcomed them

Zeldris:"3,000 years huh,please tell me that he is still alive,i'll see you soon meliodas"

Luna:"oh my god,zeldris you are so cool"

Luna went up to hug him,unable to take how hot he currently looks,When hendrickson saw her,if what he felt before was dread,then what he feels now is being in direct contact with death,at this rate going to purgatory might be better than being here,and this is when luna isn't showing her wings or halo

Zeldris:"lilith,i'm trying to be serious"

Luna:"i'm serious to,you look so hot when you said that,but now that you like me i know that you understand where meliodas is coming from"

Estarossa:"we might understand him,but we still have to follow father's orders"

Luna:"no matter,we can still enjoy our time here"

Then of course melascula asked fraudrin about his human body and he said yes,and gloxinia asked how is it they were the only ones able to escape,and fraudrin said because he didn't have enough blood to break the seal,and monspeet mentioned how the presence of the other three races beside humans is barely detectable,then fraudrin answered that it was the humans who ruled Britannia after the war 3,000 years ago,then melascula mocked them.Then galand asked fraudrin why he only acted now and fraudrin answered with how he only gained awareness 10 years ago but the seven deadly sins were medalsome of his plans

Zeldris:"meliodas right?"

Luna:"oh my gosh,you are too handsome right now,i can't"

Then luna gave zeldris a deep kiss,and then they began battling it out with zeldris naturally winning and luna whimpering with her eyes closed in pleasure making her look even more attractive since the pink hue of her skin turned into a deeper red which gave an illusion of her being covered in red mist,luna slowly slid down as zeldris caught her by her waist which was easily covered with only his one arm,he then gave her to estarossa who also gave her a deep kiss which made her make some whimpering noises

Zeldris:"before we do anything let's get some rest,our magical powers have been depleted by the goddess seal"

Zeldris said that after derieri mentioned how she is tired and needs to recharge

Zeldris:"Edinburgh hill shough be in the east,we can rest when we arrive let's go"

Then they all took of besides estarossa and luna

Luna:"hey hendrickson,you should go,after all you can't keep staying or they will change their mind and kill you"

With her reminder hendrickson hurried off because he must tell someone this news

Estarossa:"you're too kind,it almost makes me jealous"

Luna:"oh please,you jealous in the same sentence,you must be joking,any way,let's join the others"

Then they both also took of to Edinburgh

Zeldris:"what took you so long"

Estarossa:"being the nice person she is,lilith just had to warn that puny human to go away before he came to his senses"

Luna:"we planned to let him go anyway,so what's the plan"

Galand:"Well i'm off"

Zeldris:"we must wait until we are fully recovered"

Galand:"too long,i sense two powerful souls,and six above average ones,bye"

Then he flew of,along with melascula

Zeldris:"those two never listen"

Luna:"let them be,zeldris,galand will be defeated and come back soon,as for melascula,let her enjoy herself for a bit while she still can"

Estarossa:"i've been meaning to ask,but when we first met you,you already seemed to know who we were because there was no surprise on your face when we told you after observing you for a bit and your reaction towards demons"

Luna:"i guess you could say i'm some sort of prophet,but let's leave the minor details for later"

She said as she dragged zeldris and estarossa with her leaving the seven commandments to their ordeals

Estarossa:"what's with all the pulling"

Luna:"i read hendrickson's memories while we were there and,humans have a thing only lovers can do"

Zeldris:"(eyebrow raised)oh,and what might that be"

Luna:"i don't no,but they call it making love with each other,do you two know"

Estarossa:"you're too cute"

Luna:"that doesn't answer my question"

Zeldris:"it's not something to be explained,it's something to be done"

Luna:"well then let's do it right now"

Estarossa:"you have to be a bit more patient my dear,then the reward will be even sweeter"

Zeldris:"the so called making love is when the lovers comfort each other,nothing else"

Luna:"well i comfort you guys all the time,and you guys kiss me all the time,so i guess we are full fledged lovers"

Zeldris:"yes,that's the case"

Estarossa:"but don't worry,we will do something even more fun later,and trust me,you will love it"

Luna:"okay,i can't wait"

Zeldris:"you're going to taint her estarossa"

Estarossa:"please,if anything you've already tainted her before i did with the little welcome gift she gave you when she first came to that place"

Luna:what's up?"

Zeldris:"nothing,and don't worry you will enjoy it later"

Luna:"okay,now i can't wait,also how come you guys refuse everytime i say we should take a bath together"

Estarossa:"if that happens,i'm afraid that we might just do you then and there"

Luna:"do what?"

Zeldris:"don't worry about it,we will bath together later it you want"

Luna:"yay like today"

Zeldris:"no,how about in two weeks"

Luna:"okay,it's a deal,you can't break your promise,if you do i'm going to find meliodas and give him a big kiss"

Zeldris:"i promise,also don't mention his name in front of me"

Then zeldris stormed off and went back to the rest of the group

Luna:"i know he doesn't like meliodas,but really"

Estarossa:"that's not the issue"

Luna:"then what is?"

Estarossa:"you said you would kiss meliodas"

Luna:"not on the lips,i meant a kiss on the forehead or something"

Estarossa:"well,you weren't clear enough so he got jealous"

When luna heard this she brought out her wings and flew of to zeldris,the moment she got there she held his face and gave him a very long and deep kiss which the other commandments learned to ignore over time

Luna:"sorry zeldris,i didn't mean to mention his name,but i will go see him later,and by kiss i meant one on the forehead or cheeks,not on the lips"

Zeldris:"you're really naughty lilith,you have no idea"

Zeldris then pulled her closer to him and gave her another deep kiss,in which luna felt like melting so her legs weakened and she slowly slid down along with zeldris while her expression was one of pleasure

Estarossa:"Take it easy there zeldris,or you might swallow her whole"

Luna:"he can't do that,i'm too big for him to swallow"

Zeldris:"yes,you are quite big"

He said so while looking at her bosoms,but luna didn't notice

Luna:"see,even zeldris agrees with me that he can't swallow me because i'm too big"

Estarossa:"not quite sure that's what he meant,but i am tired"

Luna:"come here"

when estarossa walked over,zeldris had already gotten up to talk to the other members,so luna laid estarossa's head on her thighs and slowly stroked his head,estarossa enjoyed her actions and slowly drifted of to sleep while hugging her waist which caused his head to lay on her bosom instead of her thighs,but luna didn't really mind,the other commandments who were already used to this scene just ignored the two and discussed their plans,when they were done,zeldris carried estarossa into a temporary bed,and laid him down,he then princess carried luna and put her between them and also took a nap


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