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Beneath the surface

Author: YouYeedUrLastHaw

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Prologue

I never really understood how the world worked.

Why did opposites attract?

Why do people hate each other?

What does love really feel like?

How do you know your in love?

Why did people leave?

Why can't we all learn to get along?

I have so many questions that need to be answered, but nobody's will to answer. I mean why how do we function? Why did we let our emotions get the better of us?

I mean I'm no saint, I've had and have my faults. I've have my issues, I've more issues than a teenage girl should have. I try to work through them, I try to work through my pain, my stupidity, my ability not to be enough for people.

I'm trying to become happier and react based on my in the moment emotions, I just can't, it's almost impossible.

The one person who answered all my questions does when I was 13. My mother. She was an amazing person.

She loved the world. She always found good.

My twin sister, Olivia, and I always fought over stupid things. Mom would always have a solution.

When father was stressed from work, she'd always make him feel better by coking his favorite meal.

She just knew how to fix things.

I missed her more than anything.

Our dad remarried almost a year after she died. I feel now that pays less attention to us than he did before he was married again.

Jennifer, our step-mom, took most of his time if he wasn't at work. She had blonde hair a green eyes, as did Olivia and my dad. Often making me look almost adopted.

I have curly brown hair and light blue eye, my mom said they were the same color as the lightest ocean. I look just like her, I had sun kissed skin whilst Olivia was pale. I was more of an hour glass while Olivia was a pear shape.

We looked nothing alike. Jennifer would tease me and make me feel as if I didn't belong. She'd often make me feel I was worth nothing, only when dad was on business trips though. She never treat me as harsh as she did when we were alone in front of him.

She despised the fact I was a spitting image of my mother. She said dad would never forget her and it was my fault.

I had the name my mom had, Juneth, it was a family name every first born girl got. Odette was my first name, she loved The Swan Princess so much she named me after her.

She would never admit it but she favored me a little more, though my dad favored Olivia a little more than me. It was fine with both of us as long as the other still got attention when they needed it.

She was long gone now, I'm 17 in my Junior year of high school. I have never gone a day without missing her, I'd visit her grave once a week to refresh the flowers.

Mom wasn't going to come back, and now I was in a forever state of lonelyness and sorrow never going to return.


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I wrote this on another platform but want to see how it does on here. I did change a lot of details to make it a little more interesting hopefully. idk tell me what you guys think!

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