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Hi author! The storyline is great and interesting, however, I want to suggest something. Chop off those bulky paragraphs and use proper punctuation. That's it! It's great after all and might get better throughout the whole story! Good work!👌
It's a nice story, the truth, the characters are fresh and the way you write is just as fresh, in your paraphs, there's no cliché, every word you spit out completely different from other writers, goes on like this with the special writing you have.