Ancient Tears BloodLine

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Monsoon_Mangoes

Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. The story develops through the main protagonist, Zach.. Instead dumping every information all at once.The story literally gives light to the journey of Zack to an orphan through a great warrior. Author have a pretty good command over the language and explains the story in simple terms, (which I haven't seen on other system novels) Kudos to the author, keep up the good work 👍👍👍

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Dan_immortal

I really enjoyed your novel I hope you continue this wonderful novel until the end Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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LV 4

Mel_Aniv

This sure reminds me of sci-fi movies I have seen in the past. With a mix of martial arts in it, then I am hooked! After reading ten chaps, I must say the chapters were short. But they were enjoyable indeed! I think it was still not its best version and I can see that it has still some parts of improvements. I praise the author's creativity and imagination, as it was hard to think of your own unique world in the first place. Kudos! You are very talented and don't stop writing. Master your own writing style and discover it yourself in the future. I am rooting for you [img=recommend]

LV 3

Mistigan_Reaper

the novel is practically perfect in terms of grammar and slowly fleshing out power system. though what I do not like the repeated intrigue the mc keeps on facing for situations that could have been so much easily handled but couldn't becoz everyone keeps him in the dark until he actually faves the problem. why? coz apparently "he's not strong enough to handle the consequences" well and all his classmates with better backgrounds are? I seriously feel like such a smart mc is being forced by the author to develop into the stupid "as long as I'm strong enough all strategies are useless" person

LV 13

Jose_blabla

This book has the potential and it was worth my time reading it. The grammars are ok, some mistakes here and there but it doesn't matter, at least I could convey what they meant

LV 11

Scarlit_Rose

Very descriptive nice storytelling and over whole the background is lovely, this is a great fantasy sci fi vibe. The world-building and the plot has been carefully put effort into and well thought out and just the whole novel is a great start and this is a good novel for anyone who into these type of novel

LV 13

Tatakae

it is getting repetitive and boring. Read till 358 chaps.does he get to know about his bloodline and unlock it in later chapters?

LV 5

SorcererCat

This is a good LN. Some odd ways of doing things here and there, but a good novel over all. Well worth the read. I just wish there were more chapters.

LV 12

Dao_of_Idontknow

I don’t write review really so don’t expect much. The story is fine but think that I don’t like in the novel is that the author keeps use “ he was cruel” or a variation of this in a middle of a sentence for no reason. In addition the novel they keep saying “what transpired” no one talks like this they could just say what happen. Other than this I don’t understand why the mc’s mentor/teacher hasn’t moved him to where he is I don’t think it’s stated in the but if it was can you tell me. Other than this thing everything is going fine in the novel. Smaller Review Writing Quality: The writing quality is fine except some time the author rewrites a sentence or grammar errors. Update stability: Can’t really say anything since I’v e been reading for two weeks but normally 7 chapters a week. Story development: The development is above average; we go to different places but nothing new or different. Don’t get that many new characters in the story would be okay if they had development. Character design: Not many descriptions of characters. World Background: The world background is average the Mc goes to different places but doesn’t go their again after that, would be fine because where going to a academy but where 200 chapters in and only been to like five other places other than his house. Does have room for development because we’re in a low grade city.

LV 1

A_Gitagon

The power system alone was already enough to hook me. But then again this novel has all the things I look for in a novel. The chapters that I've read are also very interesting.

LV 13

Akira_Monadelle

I greatly admire this author's creativity. The writer's intentions are clear and the novel has a solid plot. The plot is common in anime and comics but the writer managed to make it very interesting. However, the story is greatly flawed and plagued by errors from all aspects of English. Grammar, punctuation and capitalization could use some serious work. Majority of the sentences and names started with common letters and words that were supposed to start with common letters started with capital letters. Person's names, names of places and sentences should begin with capital letters. The sentences were poorly structured and most of them were run-on sentences. Punctuation marks, especially the comma was misused and end marks were not used at the end of some sentences.When they were used, they were used incorrectly. For example, some questions ended with full stop. The dialogue in the novel seems a bit too artificial, there were no emotion behind the words and the conversations just didn't come across as realistic. The story flowed but it was very confusing. The author went from thing to another messily without proper transitions. The wording of some sentences made things even more confusing. It was as if some sentences were missing some words or had the wrong words. I recommend that the author use Grammarly or Proofreader when writing to get rid of most of the errors. Overall, the novel has a lot of potential and the author has a very active imagination. The errors are the only draw back since the plot is pretty solid. I hope the author can only get better as they write. [img=recommend]

LV 14

RayanArcadia

The novel does have some potential as the concepts are slightly interesting. We don't really have a main cast at the moment other than people protecting the mc from behind the scenes so I can't comment much on it. The world background is supposedly huge. Now, the problems with this novel are that the grammar is absolutely horrendous. There's a lot of plot holes in the Novel. The mc broke through to Mid Special-Trainee level and 50 chapters later he's somehow breaking through to Mid level again. The author keeps on forgetting what level the mc is currently at lol. Moreover, the plot progression is painfully slow. From what we've seen so far, the actual plot is supposed to start once the mc joins an Academy. The problem here is that I've read the novel upto the 300th chapter and the mc is still only 10 years old. God knows how this author is stretching 1 arc to upto idk what, as it should definitely be atleast 350 chapters. Still, I'm going to continue this novel and hope it gets better after we finally get over with the first main arc of the novel that's been going on for 300 chaps.

LV 4

Ice_Princesss

The story has a lot of potential and I must say I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. There is little to no errors in grammar or spelling so it shows that you really paid attention to that. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

LV 2

SabergKeys

This is written amazingly, even if I'm not a fan of short-length chapters, I got to say that reading this always gives me the urge to continue. It is an amazing book, I'll be sure to keep reading it and I'll support you author, keep up the good work. And, though there are errors that disturbs my flow of reading, an update can easily fix it.

LV 1

Brandongould

This is brandon gould I am sorry that it took me a while to respond to this review swap but here is my review Of the chapters that I have read I think that this is a interesting book with a unique concept. The world is detailed enough to where I can get a genreal sense of what it looks like. besides a few minor puncion errors the story is still writtin well enough to where you can understand what is going on and the story is well paced I will be sure to read more to see what happens next

LV 3

Book_Pen

UNIQUE!! The writer's creative and imaginative skills are at par. Indulging fantasy and sci-fi is an unique concept. But the chapters could be made longer and there were few grammatical errors, which weren't that problematic. Overall, it's an interesting plot. Keep going!!!

LV 12

evilmunky45

You have strong and great concept to work with, it felt pretty original, but the grammar makes me lose some of the immersion sometimes, but looking past that, I was able to enjoy the mechanics of the world you have built, keep it up!

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Samcrowned00

Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.