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Chapter 16: Bens transforming instances(Not a Chapter)

So I've been rereading some comments in previous chapters and some people don't like the fact that he doesn't need to transform in this fanfic. I'm not going to try to argue with people on this because it is a fanfic and Ultimate Ben is my favorite version, efficiency wise. I just like efficient things😅. But I also do realize that taking away transforming is kind of an insult to the character so I am going to implement it but on a few conditions.

1. I didn't like the grotesque image of Ultimate Ben using Humungosaur in UAF so whenever he needs to use an alien power that relies heavily on physical traits, he'll transform like he did with Ultimate Waybig in a previous chapter.

2. When he comes across a new species. So he's already turned into an Atlantean and a Tamaranean, even though they're humanoid. I will introduce more DC aliens in later chapters and have him fully transform.

3. In my fanfic, when Ben gets really angry, he'll turn savage and part of that will include transforming just to get that more primal instinct.

4. When he needs to use a lot of power for one ability, he'll either semi-transform or fully.

I have Final exam preparations this upcoming week so I might only be able to get another chapter out either way later today or sometime this weekend.


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I drew a better/clearer picture of the battle suit Ben uses. Follow/copy the link to go to my Deviant Art to see it.

https://www.deviantart.com/starpool3/art/Ben10-000-Battle-Suit-862519699

Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know.

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