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"Mine "he growled. Absolutely NOT
''No'', my voice felt low, although I didn't know him. His aura reflected strength and power. It made me scared, but I wasn't going to let it affect me. I am standing my ground no matter what power he holds
'' Oh, you're very stubborn !? What do mean, no? We both know that according to the law, the female wolves listen to their mates. So unless you don't want to get killed I suggest you behave "he tried to grab my wrist, I immediately flinched and pulled.
''NO, don't"
"I am your mate, you will obey me! Why are u acting like this? I don't want to hurt you, but if I have to I will", "HURT ME!! , he's got some nerve talking to me like that, little bitch.Is he trying to make me angry? Obey it seems, I stop doing that years ago, and no one is going to make me obey them. Again
As he grabbed my left hand, my right hand immediately flew to his cheek and made contact with his face. He looked shocked, serves you right. You have no right to touch me without my permission, mate or not.
"I told you 'NO', but you were too arrogant to listen. You'll regret what you just did to me after you find out who I am 'mate' "
"I am sure you would be surprised too, after finding out who I am as well. Next time I am sure you'll think before u slap someone. By the way that slaps hurt a lot. I would like to find out why your so violent "he replied with a smug look on his face.
Jerk. Who does he think he is?. Men are awful, it will stay like that forever.
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Interesting story.... superb story line. If you are looking for something interesting in werewolf plz give this a try... superb Author all the best.......
It needs some work, but it can be refined! The story is interesting, (why does it say I'm reading status: chapter 0? I don't know), the world is interesting as well. I will be keeping up with the development.
A strong female lead in a werewolf action novel! Guess, I can't resist myself no more! Your writing style and your ability to describe a scenery has got me hooked. Absolutely intriguing! Dawn seems like a complex character that is yet too simple. I can feel the pain in your words and that's what makes you a great writer! I'm excited for what's to come in Dawn's life and how the story progresses. Great job, Author!
So glad my first werewolf book is this one, Love your writing style keeps reader on edge and excited thrilling and curios of what will happen. I also love how the main character is a strong girl in a shadowy world where men rule. Keep writing live your work
Well, I had time to kill (during class, of course). First of all, I don't usually read these kinds of books. More specifically, I mean romance, female lead in general, and possibly drama. But I guess I can give an opinion from a completely objective point of view. The thing I like the most about this novel from what I've seen is the world build. It's an interesting one, to say the least. Makes you wonder what kind of other things could exist in it. It has potential to grow into something amazing. Character design wise, I believe the main lead is well-written. She fits perfectly the 'strong mindset'. Very stubborn but charismatic. On the other hand, the male lead, for now, seems a bit off to me. I feel like his personality is a bit inconsistent. The first encounter with him also appears to portray him in a way that is too lackluster compared to what he actually is. I don't have much to say about the plot with the limited chapters right now but I would say it's still in a sort of introduction period. It shouldn't stay that way in the future. Every story has to build up to something; an obstacle would be the best way to say it. The romance aspect of this story also has to follow the same rules. Then, finally, the writing quality is one thing that will always affect the reader's experience. For grammar, try to use something like Grammarly; nifty stuff for writers. Then, there's text format. At the very least, be careful of where you put your comas and your dots, and be sure that the shift between dialogue and narration is clear. Well, that's it. Good luck on your writing experience.