THE LAST ASSASSIN(Rinleigh's Legend)

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kuhaku_sora

You have an interesting plot with an outstanding book cover! I like how the author creates the conflict and would be later on fixed while the story progresses. The passion is there, and I could bet it would reward you soon! The only advises that I can give you are few suggestion to edit the paragraphs from here and there. There are missing and numerous commas, your and you're (difference between words), and some sentences that are slightly difficult to understand. But don't be down because English is an arduous thing to learn. In no time, you will notice these errors and fix them in due time! Nevertheless, I believe that that story has some potential, and I invite you all to read this book

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Ellie_143

good quality of work, the author made her work entertaining enough for readers, as she raised the woman power. what i mean to say is that, it's not very usual for me to read a book, so gorish and having a girl as the female lead to do all that sort of works. i love how the author, describe her every scenes especially on how the fl kills her prey. the scenes hook me up so bad, that i am craving for more. i think i just found a good book, that will make me awake all night. GREAT JOB AUTHOR!

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HotRedFlaming

I don't know where to start. But if you are into gore, ruthless female lead, and killing villains then this may be a good novel for you. I never expected that this was how the novel would turn out since I never see this on female leads. The FL reminds me of ruthless chinese protagonists that is decisive in killing her enemies. The second hlf of the chapter would let you know which route this will take. Now the grammar needs some work and some misspellings could be found. Now as a guy what made me uncomfortable in this novel that Rinleigh's friends get butt****ed by gays to earn money. I'm not into that, but some readers might. Im curious where this story will lead since the mc isnt just a normal girl. But continue author and may you find your readers...

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ssf_in_reading

ssfx3yuchens_ here with a honest review. So far I'm liking this novel, enjoy how the story plays out and find it unpredictable. Minor grammatical errors, but find it interesting.

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DefyingHuman

I cant help but notice the harem tag. Is it a reverse harem where the female lead have many guys? I am Really confused. can someone Please explain it to me?

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Rena_Gindi

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So far, the story is so amazing and worth to read. The story is full of thrilling parts. Tipong kailangan mong iclick yong notification bell or ano ba tawag dun parang you'll get notified and updated for the next episode. The flow of the story is so good and satisfying. I'd like to recommend this novel. 😊 Keep on writing Miss Xien. Goodluck! And we're here to support you. 💌

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DaoistfdHKAF

From the synopsis I've read. it's kinda interesting na subaybayan yong story. I've never been a fond of novels. But this one kinda thrilling to read. Well, the author must be good enough in terms of writing and she also has this ability to convey people to read more of her work. Goodluck and keep bleeding Ate<33

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Fever_Froz

author can u plz give us readers free access to ur book like can u add fast pass option so that the people that cant afford coins could read as well plzz I would like to read ur book as well if u do ur book looks very interesting plz add fast pass🙏

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Karen_Gilliam

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Spading

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Ronaldo_Quispe

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The author's way of conveying her mind through her works is pretty awesome. And I could tell how she makes up with her characters. Rinleigh character already speaks danger. I also find her cool, i mean who wouldn't? for someone who was put in the arena alone, and was able to face enemies, who are already trained for killing, and was able to win that said fight? I could tell how good her character was. this story is pretty gorish, but still! i can commend how good this book is😊 i really recommend you guys reading this😊

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Ken_Sama

Well, the story is interesting and you can find some minor grammar errors but still awesome Just keep writing and reading some stuff to get some ideas and knowledge

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Jozan

😭😭😭😭🤧🤧🤧🤧 I feel so sorry for the dad he didn't deserve what happened to him. OH HOW THIS WORLD IS SO CRUEL!! 😠😠🌎😠😠 It's nicely written by the way 😌👏

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CaptainChaos0301

I really like this book. no faults in it. Damn, I gave up on trying to critisice u with only the first chapter. ahhh. yes. i have lost my ability to spel a few days back, so sorry if i dont spel right-

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Marshall75

Boring and stupid story written by a lunatic. Characters are deplorable and predictable. No reason to waste your time with this one.