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Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Mc Pov

It's been twelve years since me and my sister came to this world,so far everything with the same as canon with a few minor changes,which of course was me and Hinata being both stronger than are canon counter parts,the hidden cloud also tried to kidnap Hinata,let's just say they surely regretted it after what we did to them,but pretty much angered the raikage which resulted into the incident were neji's dad died thanks to hiruzen being the pushover that he is.

And unlike canon Naruto the people of the village don't lash out at me, because they fear what I might do to them after I crippled the first guy that tried me,I even became friends with kuruma of course it took time but I managed win him over an free him from his cage,oh and did I mention that all the girls even Sakura our now simping over me.

Another thing that changed is that sasuke is apparently a girl,and goes by the name of miyuki Uchiha,of course the Uchiha clan massacre still happened thanks to obito,and Itachi killing them all except miyuki,I in the other hand to the opportunity to store as many dead Uchiha bodies I could find into storage scrolls I made using fuinjutsu that I put in my inventory, before danzo and his root showed up.

Also just last week mizuki tried to trick me into sneaking into the Hokage manor to get the scroll that contains forbidden techniques,of course I went along with the plan to get my hands on the shadow clone technique along with some other jutsu,after completing the task I killed mizuki by condensing the air around his head sucking the oxygen out of him similar to how zaheer from legend of korra tried to kill korra,after that I put the scroll into my inventory and left the area while also leaving evidence that he was a traitor.

Currently I am with hinata,wearing a open black jacket,with a black shirt and black pants,while she is wearing a short open black jacket with a black crop top and black pants, heading down to the academy to determine our teams.(A/N what can I say I like the color black)

"so do you think kakashi is going to our sensei, because it's pretty obvious that us along with miyuki are going to be a team,after all I got the highest score out of the girls followed by miyuki and Sakura coming in third place", hinata said to me

"of course he is currently the strongest jounin they have besides guy sensei,and I always believed that saskura only got the highest score in canon because you canon counter part was just to nice and didn't really want to hurt anybody, however your different for many reasons I still remember that time you brutally beat those boys who tried to pick on you", I said to her remembering how she sent her would be bullies to the hospital.

"ah yes good times", she said with a sadistic smile appearing on her face.

Few minutes later at the academy

"hey menma I'm going to stop at the restroom will quick you can go head with me", Hinata said while I continue heading to our class,"ok".

Arriving in my class only to see,some of the Canon characters like shikamaru who is a sleep,choji munching on chips,Kiba playing with akamaru,miyuki whose in the corner staring at me which I catch causing her to quickly look away with a blush,an ino and sakura who are busy arguing about somthing and well shino being shino, walking and sitting next to miyuki I begin to make small talk.

"I saw you staring at me,did you want to talki to me about somthing or perhaps did you just want me", I said teasing her.

"wh-what are you talking about, I wasn't staring", miyuki says getting all flustered.

"uh huh,sure", I said with a smirk.

"menma!,I missed you!!", sakura said as she runs and sits next to me," oh great sakura", I said thinking to my self

"no fair Sakura,I wanted to sit next to him",ino said while Sakura just sticks her tongue at her,"so how's your day", Sakura asked me.

"great, and yours", I said to her

"oh it's going fine now that your here", she said with a small blush.

"excuse me but you seem to be in my seat",Hinata said appearing next to Sakura.

"go away can't you see I'm talking to menma wait,I know that voice hi-hinata", Sakura says as she slowly.turns around and realizes who she was talking to.

"what was that, forehead I could quite here that", hinata said.

"s sorry hinata,I didn't know it was you",Sakura says with a panicked expression.

"you might want to remove yourself from that seat,and make it quick my patience is running thin",hinata said.

"Sorry!",Sakura said as she leaves and sits next to ino.

"dammit Sakura even I know not to talk back to hinata",ino said.

"finally I thought she would never leave", miyuki said

"you and me both thanks hinata", I said

"anything for you, besides only people who I seem are worth may have a shot with my menma like miyuki for instance", hinata said while miyuki blushes hearing that last part.

Resting my head on the desk i decide to take a quick nap while hinata and miyukii talk about random stuff,while everyone else goes around during whatever they do until eventually iruka sensei shows up.

"Alright SHUT UP",iruka yells waking me and shikamaru up and getting the entire classes attention.

"great now that I have your attention,I'm going to tell you who your teammates will be and who your sensei is", he said,"first menma, hinata and miyukii you will make up team 7 and your sensei will be kakashi hatake", he said.

"yep I knew it", I said thinking myself.

"next shino,Kiba and sakura you will make up team 8 and your sensei will be kurenai yuhi", ,he said

He then called out the rest of the teams,with of course ino,shikamaru and choji all being on the same team,and then left as all the joins came and got their students.

"how much longer is he going to take to get here", miyuki says obvi talking about kakashi who is famous for being late.

"I don't know maybe he got lost", hinata said even though me and her would be able to sense if he is coming with me using my kagura mind's eye,and her using her Byakugan.

"I know let's,give him a little surprise for making us wait this long what do you say y'all in or what", I said with mischievous grin.

"count me in", hinata said

"why not", miyuki said

"great", getting a bucket of water begin to set a trap at the door so when kakashi comes in it will fall over his head.

shortly after

kakashi pov

I don't know what the Hokage was thinking surely he knows I'm just going to fail theses kids if they don't pass my test, thinking that I quickly made a stop at obito and rin graves to pay my respects,now heading to pick up my students.i stop infront of the door as I notice something tied to it at the top,"oh they are trying to get me with old water bucket over the head trick, sorry kids but your 100 years to early to hit me with that old trick", I say as I walk into the room dodging the water as it falls down, That's what would have happened but Instead when the buck tipped.over nothing came out until suddenly I was soaked from a splash of water that can crashing down on me.

Kakashi pov end

Normal POV

Watching as kakashi walks into the room he triggers the trap I set up for him attempting to dodge the water, nothing comes out because I use my water manipulation to hold it in the bucket,then releasing it I watch as the water comes crashing down on him, causing me, Hinata and miyuki to bust out laughing, looking at us angrily and surprised he tells us to meet him up on the roof,where we talked about are dreams along with likes and dislikes.

(A/N you probably noticed some of the changes while some already have been explained already,you also probably noticed that miyuki is different from her male counter part,well I was aiming to make her to were she would only get angered at something that reminds her of Itachi,oh and yes just like the others girls she likes the mc,oh and know the mc won't be going after every girl he sees, honestly I might only do a small harem depending on how I feel oh and to those that get triggered over changes in canon and stuff like this,FUCK YOU! it's my Fanfic and I can do whatever I want that's why its called fanfiction.

Ps let me know if their are any mistakes,and if you have any recommendations,I would really appreciate it.


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