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Chapter 2: The Meeting

As the Author, I forgot to say how Sacaroth looks. Here it is: He has short dark brown hair, green-grayish eyes, about 5.7, and has a little fat on his stomach. Not a lot that's noticeible , only when he isn't wearing a shirt. Not handsome in the face area, just not ugly. I'd give him a better rating, only if he washed his face more often. Anyway, here's the Story.

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As the worshiper/ Priest as I found out, showed me the way through the king's castle to the room where the other two were waiting. I glance at the Priest, and he understands, leaving. One was a teenage girl, with pink hair, and next to her, was a man, maybe about 20-21, slightly taller than me, with red hair.

"Hello." I say as I walked in, startling them. The girl stutters out "H-hello." And the young man, just says "Yo." Well, time to introduce myself.

"Well, let's get started, shall we? Let's use new names if you wish. I'm Sacaroth, Senior in highschool, specializing in games."

The man starts "Hello, Sacaroth, I'm Ben. I'm a college student, I guess I'd be specializing in gambling. I'll think of a new name, but I'm not sure about it," He continues,

"And this young lady is my sister, Mary. Not sure what she's gonna do about her name yet. And don't get any thoughts, you're not gonna get with her, Okay?" I reply,

"Of course, I understand. I mean, I'm just a dweeb, and I could never think about that. I mean, if she said she liked me, I'd think she was on a dare. Anyway, she's too cute for me to resist." I grin at her, and then look back, only to see a fist coming my way. I, of course duck, and that was clumsily, and almost like he planned it, he misses on purpose, he grins, and we start laughing.

We look over at Mary, and she's as red as a tomato. I ask,

" Let me guess, she's never had a boyfriend?" And he just simply nods. Now, here's when someone else walks in.

"Ah, your awake, young man. Just so you know, these two came together, and the other is leaving right now. if you focus in the lower middle of your view, you should see something." I do as he say's, and I see a little icon, wrapped in chains.

Ben shrieks, like a little girl who got a pony for her birthday. meanwhile, Mary is just sitting there, confused. I look at it again, and now a message floats off it, saying to complete the requirements before it will allow me.

I notify the man, meanwhile, a greatsword appears in Ben's hands, with a sheath appearing on his back. he struggles, asks Mary for help, and together they struggle to put the sword away. Me and the man laughed, and I introduce myself, and he replies,

" Oh, sorry kid, I forgot to tell you, I'm the king, and until you get your system, you have to work on your own."


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Hey guys, tell me if this feels forced. Went back over after another author I respect gave me some tips, and yep, forced. I'll keep it that way, so I can be reminded by you readers about my past mistakes...

I did fix the paragraph issue though.

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