/ Fantasy / A Decleration of Love
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"Don't say it Zuko."
He looked hurt. "Why not?"
Her eyes were moist and she turned away from him and said in a quiet, resigned tone. "It sounds too final and what if..." She let out a dry sob and he instinctively wrapped his arms around her and spun her around so she could rest her head on him. She relaxed a bit but was still a little tense. She finished her sentence, whispering into his shirt. "What if you don't come back?"
Zuko suddenly held her at arms length and studied her face with a raging passion in his eyes. "Hey, look at me. I will NEVER leave you. Ok?"
Katara nodded but pulled him closer to her and captured his lips in hers for a burning second. They both knew what it was. A declaration of love...
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Synopsis is pretty good!! It got me hooked. The story's well written, and the characters are well developed. Keep up the good work author!!!!!
I am so sorry author that I am not aware of the background of the characters. While you did start the story in a very interesting way. I liked the flow of the narration but the jumps felt a little difficult to follow. While I liked the overall plotline I wish you would give a little background to your fan-fic to help new readers join you as well irrespective of they are aware of the source story or not...
Great start, nice synopsis. I didn't expect this to be the avatar lol but I'm enjoying it so far. Gonna add to collects so look out for that. My only issue were the small typos but that ain't really a big deal. Just get someone to proof read for you. I'll surely help with the proof reading too when I continue reading. I don't wanna mark you down for the typos so just take my 5. Good Job.
This was AMAZING!! I came here from your story in wattpad and I am not disappointed. I hope you get the attention you deserve because ur writing is only getting better. But just some constructive criticism, I think you should focus more in the quality of ur writing other than the content. u know? A story is how its written as mush as what is written. but other than that, this was great.