His Bite (BOOK 1)

This book has a lot of potential, and I see it being published and read next to twilight. Hoping for more chapters! [img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

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phoenixhyperion

The initial chapter was good. Endearing kind of good. I like how you describe your characters author! It's well presented and they gave me a picture of who they should be. I mean you gave them life and not some bland description of their actions. And I think that's really really nice. Good job there author! Keep up the good work!

Simple exquisite work here. Great grammar, storyline is amusing and very vivid. The writer really knows how to work through words. Please update more often, I am one of your avid fans now!

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TofSpades

The plot, writing style, characters, and grammars were all absolutely good! I saw some very few grammatic flaws but despite those the story still is amazing. I think I'll keep on reading and find out what more will happen. A wonderful story! Highly recommend.

So for some unknown reasons my first review got deleted, grr. Anyway, I really love this novel! It is absolutely great and I highly recommend this to everyone that is a fan of the supernatural! Love it! [img=recommend]

I LOVED IT! This story is absolutely breath taking for a starting novel, I do hope that many people would bump into this cause this piece is gem. Story line and grammar is a 100%! Love it <3

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Ade_joy

very beautiful story. I love reading vampire stories and I have read a lot of them but this one is really amazing and unforgettable. We are waiting for more chapters, please keep writing.

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xAlexiax

Great start, really enjoyed reading. MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!

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RenPenRen

This is great. That's all I could say. The writing is good and very understandable. The characters were very descriptive and detailed which is great for us readers. And for a romance story, It is not so bad at all. Y'all should definitely read this😁

LV 10

AmateurAuthor

This is an amazing starting novel! Nice story, great concept, and good potential! Even though it has on a few chapters, it has already hooked me up! Can't wait for more update. Keep up the good work author!

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Mel_Aniv

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Congrats for a job well done! BTW, I am from review swap.....

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Darkjokes

Great First chapter. Little to no grammatical errors. A novel about vampires is always am interesting one. I like how you have described things in detail as well. Looking forward for more chapters :)

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DaoistKPi7rD

Great grammar, storyline is still on the shadows, which is good for it keeps tHe readers hooked.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp] Will wait for next update!

I really loved how the author spilled each scenes, it showed how vivid it was and imagery was greatly portrayed. A must read indeed! Good luck!

Excellent writing skills, exhibited great grammar! I sure can't wait for this to be on the top list of undiscovered, definitely worth the read!

LV 10

OEmilio

This story is fresh and invigorating. You can tell quite easily that the author puts a lot of effort into their word choice in order to produce a vivid image of what is going on in the world. the book is barely taking off but already you can tell it has amazing potential. Would highly recommend Please check it out!!!

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Nancy_Jim

This is a very great book. Beautiful creation. Perfectly written. There's nothing about it that I doubt. Every sentence is believable. I really do anticipate more chapters. You are goooooood at writing —not to flatter you. Most of us work harder for it, few like you are naturally gifted. Rooting for this one. Keep soaring lovely[img=update][img=update]

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miu_hozuki

Great opening and solid introduction the male and female leads. I like how the pasts of both characters is still largely shrouded in mystery to be unraveled along with the plot. Definitely curious to see where the story goes from here. Spelling and grammar are tight, with only the very odd typo. Prose is clean and flows well. I do hope to see more.. give it a try... if you are into vampires & werewolves, you will definitely like it.

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mozza_mello

Ayee that was a great read! :D The writing is perfect, there were almost no mistakes, and maybe even none lol idk, the punctuation use is also very good! :D Alsoooo, I really like how the author describes things, like it's very clear and poetic, I could almost picture the scene in my head hehe! <3 Am interested to find out more about them! :D Great work, author! <3