The Overlord Descends

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dandeanvas

It's my first story so there are some mistakes but it's a good story. The recent chapters are better compared to the first ones so I think I'm getting better at it.

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AbsoluteCarnage

Such a gem so fine and rare. For times so dark and unfair. Thanks we give for this tome laid bare. Untold is the end yet to be shared. More chapters we so deeply care. Ratings of First class I will dare. A++ my good sir.

LV 4

Man_of_culture

The grammar/spelling is just wrong. I don't know what book you were reading but, I don't get why you would write names and the first word in a sentance in lower case. I recommend using Grammarly or something like that. It will improve reading experience tremendously without much effort.

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DaoisteHo6ya

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kobeblackmamba

Such a gem so fine and rare. For times so dark and unfair. Thanks we give for this tome laid bare. Untold is the end yet to be shared. More chapters we so deeply care. Ratings of First class I will dare

LV 4

HangerBaby

so reall the most off putting thing is the writing. its bad, like 3rd grader bad. just using Grammarly and rereading it would honestly eliminate so many of the problems. and the character design is another issue with them being writen and portrayed in a weird way. i dont really know how to explain it you just have to read it to understand. i wont say dont read it but its not something id recommend

LV 4

Quinton1200

i very good story. sadly it hasnt been updated all just suddenly ends

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Zephyr666

Thiss is really awesome fanfic about 2 series overlord x danmachi the plot and the detail also really good and its really suits my taste[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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fudanshi69

Only things I can say about this one is good book, slow update, but rewarding. Though I hope the author doesn't drop it, we really love this one, it's rare to see good fics nowadays.

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gamingsus

it was masterpiece. is it already droped or author is busy?,...................................................................................

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YOUR_ANXIETY

The story is amazing so far. The characters are portrayed well and the atmosphere is nice as well. But make sure to keep safe during these times. 💖

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victor_dupretz

More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Gustavo_Silva_0811

Kkkkk que historia maravilhosa espero o próximo capítulo 👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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MBE1

update more , more update .

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Diogo_Sanatna

I really liked this novel starting with the story that holds you and the quality of the writing is good I don't have much to say about the backstory the development of the characters is great and the story has developed costtemete

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adnan_ashab

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killiam115

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