/ Fantasy / Peak Level
Synopsis
A young boy trying to find his identity.
A young man who understood his adversaries.
An adult who came knowing what will transpire.
An old man who'll leave his legacy.
A story of many twist and tales, dramas and comedy along with the spice and thrill of the war that's happening. A mysterious fortune teller? A Gods descent? "No matter how many you guys are, I'll beat the living daylights out of you"
Reminder to all Readers:
1. Use your imagination
2. Use your imagination
3. The writings are a combination of novel writing and script writing
4. The story is blunt and straight to the point
5. The dialogues will always go last
6. The Dialogue are separated and isn't meant to be read as the usual novels out there
7. '_' means it's an inner thought or a whisper
8. "_" conversing/trying to converse someone
Recommended music while reading.
1. Dynasty by Mia
2. Spectre by Alan Walker
3. Stitches by Shawn Mendes
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It is a little early to tell anything about the story. It is convoluted in its narrative and presentation of characters, most times it feels as if a whole paragraph or introduction is missing, and things happen too fast for you to keep track of events or what the characters are doing. The dialogue is messy in its delivery too, it doesn't feel natural, it is as if the characters were NPCs with set dialogue and little to no investment in said words besides speaking them. Overall, it can be better and I hope the author improves his story telling as he proceeds with the book.