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Chapter 19: Progress

-Thank god, I used devil fruit ability otherwise I would be the one who would have sent flying after being poked in the butt.

Wait devil fruit ability...

Uh..Oh...'

After that, I approached Guy Sensei and was about to ask him about it but he interrupted me before.

"Don't worry about it, Kakashi is my eternal rival, He will understand if we explain it to him"

I just nodded. Kakashi was one of the favourite characters in anime. He always remained calm and collected and analysed every situation before taking action. He also is quite trustworthy to both friends and Hokage and was quite funny.

But this is the real world now, I can't judge a person just by Anime. I trusted sensei because he is open-minded, not scheming, trustworthy and with a good heart. I related him to Anime first but I also understood the above qualities just after talking with him the first time.

A few seconds later, Kakashi came back.

"Well, that feeling was ....not quite good."

"Kakashi my eternal rival, my student was able to beat you in his first duel, even I was not able to do that, l will remember the way little Raiden was able to do it. Don't worry Kakashi next time I will be the one to poke your butt and send you flying." Guy said with determination and imaginary flames erupted from his background.

Raiden didn't know that his little duel will able to change the way of the duel between two eternal Rivals.

"Oye, Guy that's not necessary, we can do our duel in the usual way, you don't have to go overboard," Kakashi asked Guy with a pleading and panicked look.

Even though my secret was out and Kakashi will ask about it and I am unsure of the outcome but I can't stop my laugh after listening to their interaction.

"Haha, Haha...." I got their attention and they both looked at me with a confused look.

" You guys look good together. I think you should marry each other."

I got death glares from both of them.

"Sorry..." I said in low voice.

"Well, Guy we will talk about how to duel later. But Raiden, what was that last move that you used. It was like you disappeared and reappeared behind me. Guy, does he know flying thunder god?" Kakashi asked with a curious look.

I looked at Guy for some response. He just gave me a nod.

"Sigh," 'Here goes nothing.'

I then activated my Byakugan which surprised Kakashi because I was using elemental jutsu before and Hyugas were forbidden from using it.

After that, I explained to him my complete story. My banishment from the clan, why my father told me to hide it from the clan, the mutation and some abilities that I got from mutation.

"So Kakashi san, Please don't tell anyone about all this, even Hokage. If anyone came to know about it and spread it, then I will be in huge trouble. I don't want to reveal it before I get strong enough to protect my self or could be able to run from anyone. The current me is not strong enough."

"Hmm, I got your point and your reason for hiding it but why forbade me from telling Hokage. He is the leader and strongest ninja in the village and can protect you from anyone. Are planning to do something against the village or something?" He asked with a suspicious look.

"No No No, I just don't want to tell Hokage because he can't always keep an eye on me so he may assign some Ninja to do it. And if by any chance it got out. It's not like I don't trust village ninja or Hokage. I am just scared to let others know about it who I don't know."

'Well, Guy trusts him then there should be no problem. But if he shows any suspicions then I will talk to Hokage. But I am impressed by this boy, he is 8 or 9 and shows such intelligence and he is as strong as special Jonin or maybe a new jonin. Geniuses really defy any logic Sigh' thought Kakashi

[AN: I know it first-person Pov but I wanted to show his thoughts so...]

"Fair point, Ok then I will not tell anyone about it but there is a thing that you should follow, otherwise there will be major consequences. Do you understand?"

I tensed up what is it that I have to follow otherwise I will have consequences.

I nodded with a serious expression.

"Ok, so you will not tell anyone that you used Konohagakure Hiden Secret Taijutsu Technique: One Thousand Years of Death on me otherwise you know what will happen," he said with an evil smile behind his mask.

I sweat dropped by his serious thing to follow.

"Ok, but Guy sensei already left just after you gave me the warning. I think he may tell others about it." I said while pointing in the direction where Guy sensei was standing.

Kakashi looked in the pointed direction and found the Guy was gone. He panicked about what he(guy) was about to do.

"Well, see you later," he said and hastily shushin-ed away.

"Sigh" I sighed at the couple's antics and decided to continue my training.

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[After two years]

In training ground three, In the evening

"Come on, Raiden you can do better than that," he said after blocking my attack.

"Yeah, I know sensei but these weights are hard to get used to," I said before trying to attack guy sensei at his chakra point with enough power which can easily give a fatal injury to any genin which would not be easy to heal.

He just dodged it replied with a kick in my abdomen and sent me flying to some distance. I would have dodged it easily but 300 kg weight in each limb made me hard to move.

"That's enough for today, you have to get used to your weights. It will give you a huge boost in your strength. If you get used to 1-ton weights in your all limbs then I think in a year or two, You will be able to reach the strength and speed of an elite jonin."

"Hai guy sensei." I just got up and deactivated my byakugan.

"You have grown so much in these years, I remember when you first met me, you were nothing but a small Youthful child who was trying to get strong on his own. Now, You are becoming such a strong Youthful man. Thinking about that make my Youthful spirit grow more and more. Ohh! Such Youth" He said while crying.

"It's my honour and pleasure being your student sensei but aren't you being too much of a drama queen about it and why now all of a sudden?"

"Oh, I will be getting a new genin team tomorrow."

" So....., It's not the first time that you got a new team while I was training under you. What is so special about this time?"

"You are the same as Kakashi in that, always so attentive."

'There is nothing attentive about it, you just simple sensei.' I thought

"Well, In that team, I am particularly interested in a child who doesn't have a talent for both ninjutsu and genjutsu. But trying his best to overcome his weakness just by taijutsu."

'So, it's about lee hah...'

"So I might be more busy training him as he is the same as me when I was a child and I will also be doing missions. So I might not be able to give you time."

"Oh, don't worry about it sensei, You may also introduce me to your new team. I am quite interested in meeting that boy who is the same as you."

"So, that's what makes you interested in this particular team. You ignored all of my previous teams. And yeah there is also a Hyuga in that team.

Ahh ...what was his name again?

Yeah, it Hyuga Neji."

"He is my brother, Sensei. I told you about him before, you really are bad at remembering people."

"Really! I can't seem to remember."

"Don't worry about it, and I will also have Kakashi sensei to train me sometimes. I am sure he will reject his team again this time."

"Hmm, You may be right about him,"

"Alright then Guy sensei, I will be going now to get used to this heavyweight and I can't make my shadow clones wear it as they will just collapse due to its weight."

"very well."

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It's been two years since I met Kakashi sensei. After getting to know each other more, I insisted him to teach me kenjutsu. At first, he was too lazy to do it but after blackmailing him about Thousand years of death, he decided to teach me. Currently, I am not completely proficient in it but I have a good grasp of it.

Guy sensei never got to tell anyone about it as Kakashi sensei made a deal with him to keep the secret.

He also taught me Shadow clone Jutsu after I told him about my chakra reserve and my chakra control. I can make 30 clones as stable as Naruto's clone were which helped me a lot as I sent a clone to the academy, one clone to hospital learning medical ninjutsu after guy recommended me and original and the remaining spent all the time in training.

But it also got Hokage's attention. After his talk with both Kakashi and Guy sensei, he also got more interested in me. He also once called me to his office asked about various things and early graduation. I told him my reason to train and other things but kept my byakugan and devil fruit abilities secret. I also denied early graduation, giving him a reason for being with friends and it gives more time to train without missions.

He was quite satisfied with me after the talk. Maybe he saw the will of fire in me because I sprouted out several bullshits to make him believe me which were half lie and half-truth.

I am pretty sure, I got the attention of Danzo because I was training in the hospital while in the academy and was showing quite a talent in it as my control was top notch. But he never approached me, maybe because of the Hokage.

I can use do the minor operation now, use chakra scalpel jutsu and could also use mystical palm. But my knowledge of the body and various poison is not enough as it takes quite a large amount of time to remember it.

[AN: don't know much about medical ninjutsu or its techniques so feel free to tell me about it]

My nature transformation has also progressed quite a bit. I have mastered water and lightning transformation the previous month and currently trying to master others.

I haven't learned any new jutsus but my destructive power of previous ones has increased exponentially.

I have also trained my byakugan and its Jutsu and also trained devil fruit abilities. I can use all the Hyuga Jutsus proficiently. and also my range of Byakugan has increased to 7 km.

I have also trained devil fruit abilities and can do various things that the law was able to do and thinking of some new uses of it. Its range is up to 200 m.

[AN: If have any Ideas then please share]

I also started to do weight training this year as I am already 10 and a half years old.

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After I reached my apartment to freshen up and get changed. I looked at myself while standing in front of the mirror. I couldn't help but feel happy about myself as I have a finely toned body and I am of height 144 cm.

I was wearing a light blue t-shirt and black pants. I have short sea blue hairs and deep blue eyes.

'I am quite handsome, aren't I' I smiled at myself before heading out with my weights on.

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[STATS]

[Name: Raiden]

[Age: 10]

[Chakra: High Jonin ]

[Chakra type: Ashura's chakra ( formed with

the help of ninshu of hogoromo

and his followers]

[Physical strength: 360]

[Chakra control: 93%]

[Affinities

Water. 100%

Lightning. 100%

wind. 80%

earth. 75%

Fire. 20%]

[Byakugan mastery: 60%]

[Devil Fruit: ope ope no mi]

[Fruit mastery: 64%]

[Taijustsu style: Gentle fist (mastered)

Strong fist(mastered)

Lotus(basic)

Leaf Hurricane(mastered)

Destructive Fist(mastered)(name of the new technique that guy made for him)

Gentle Fist: 8 trigram 64 palms(mastered),

Rotation(mastered), Air palm

( mastered)

Lotus: Front lotus (mastered) ]

[ Ninjutsu:

Independent: Body Flicker Jutsu,

Transformation Jutsu,

Replacement Jutsu

Rasengan

Shadow Clone

Water style:

water bullet Jutsu

water wall jutsu

water clone jutsu

water prison jutsu

water dragon jutsu

water reflection clone jutsu

Hiding in the mist technique etc

Lightning :

Lightning Burst jutsu

Lightning Clone jutsu

Lighting bolt jutsu

Lightning Blade jutsu

Lightning blast jutsu

Chain lightning jutsu

Lightning dragon jutsu

Lightning fang jutsu etc

Earth style:

Mud wall Jutsu

Mud clone Jutsu

Hiding like a mole jutsu

Earth prison Jutsu etc

Wind style:

Great breakthrough

vacuum sphere

vacuum blade

air bullet jutsu

gale palm etc

Fire style:

Great Fireball jutsu]

[Genjutsu: Clone Jutsu]

[Kenjutsu]

[Medical Ninjutsu :

Chakra scalpel (advanced)

Mystical palm (advanced)]

[Chakra mode :

.

Lightning ( trying but not able make it stable)

water. ( trying but not able make it stable) ]


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