Where did it go wrong?

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MaestChump

My first webnovel so it probably won't be very well done, I'll still try my best to make it entertaining though, just don't expect much. Regarding a release schedule I'll try to make it 7 chapters/ week but no promises.

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meatlessman

Just randomly found this novel. Not much to say just yet as the amount of chapters isnt very much, but it is good so far and I am excited to see what happens.

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RosoviyR

A good novel, the story is developed in detail, about the spelling I do not know what to say, since it is not my native language. In general, it is worth evaluating, but it would be better to wait for chapters up to 50-60

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ILOVENOVELS

reallllllllyyyyyyyyyy llllllllllooooooovvvvveeeee ttttthhhhhhhheeeeeeeeee nnnnnnnnoooooooooovvvveeeellllllllllllo . neeeeeeeeeedddddddddd mmmmmmmmoooorrrreeee

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Fusen51

very good read, I enjoyed it a lot. got d character development, and if you like yandere novels, this is a must read.hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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PeachSaint69

good ...................................novel. ..............................give it a bo'of'wo'er. ................... ...... ................

work had everything to be good only thing that prevents it is delay to release,other than that, the work is perfect noa I can't wait for the arch mage to return

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liverpool_9030

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Lolmax

Greate story senor hoping to see more soon waiting for the princess and kasa to get in the fight against one another for throwing mc in prison.

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VirginOlives

Great novel with a non opmc trying to leech off hie yandere 'not related by blood' I repeat 'not related by blood' sister. Also your handling the way he interacts with his sister great but some parts are quite the big plot holes. But overall I liked it better than most novels here so 10/10. Keep up the good work bro.

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