Chapter 4: against the rules
over the weekend I read a novel where (...) is a perspective shift ( 1st person to 3rd person and vise versa) sooo ima steal that. warning this chapter is not for the faint of heart.
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the world slowed down as the ant rushed towards Hana's neck then a snap could be heard then a blood curtailing scream filled the air.
"AHHHHHHHH!!!" Hana screened as her neck twisted, the cracking sounds got louder and louder until the ant cleanly ripped her head off. bits of flesh and blood drooped from the severed baby's head in the ant's mouth and Hana took in her last breath of air signaling her death.
around Hana's body system screens started to appear.
[error]
[error]
[error]
[MC has broken the first law set by the creator, the MC's soul shall be sent to the counsel of deities]
[error]
[an unknown force has stoped the teleportation process]
[error]
[an unknown force is tampering with the mc's soul]
[error]
[the unknown force is gaining access to the system activate shield]
[error]
[the shield failed activation of the last resort... self-distraction in 5...4...3]
[error]
[the invader is gaining control over the system, usage of self-destruction has been stoped]
[the system is now under the control of ******](...)
I woke up to find myself with the familiar sight of a dark expanse "I'm back here." as soon as I thought that a flash of light covered the space. the light was unimaginably bright so I instinctively tried to cover my nonexistent eyes with my nonexistent hands which did not work.. can you guess why?
the space I was in then transform from infinite darkness to a place akin to hell.
" hahahahah look at what we have here" a voice witch sounded about 15 said in a playful tone "
"whos there!!" I screamed but the voice completely dismissed it and continued on.
"to think this pitiful thing broke the first law hehe" each word coming out of the voice's mouth sounds like it came from a different direction like the owner voice completely surrounded me.
"The first law? hmm are you talking about my death?" to my surprise the voice actually answered my question.
"yep, you died a bearer of the title of mc Bernt into their soul died." the voice continues as it laughed at each word they let its mouth. "the most impossible feat for the MC you did it in the time of 12 DAYS!!" the laughs got more and more maniacal as he went on until he stopped laughing and said:
"for your impossible accomplishment, i shall give you a prize." a slight chuckle could be heard when the voice said these words
"a prize? somethings not right about this." I was a little skeptical at what the voice said.
"DRUM ROLL PLEASE!!! THE PRIZE ISSSSSS" after a short pause the voice sad " 0.1 SECONDS IN TORTURE!!! relative to me at least." ( the last part was whispered so Hana did not hear it)
'as I thought but 0.1 seconds isn't that too short' i thought even though I know that the voice could possibly be able to read my mind.
"well, the underworld is running low on a budget these days sigh* I'll soon have to sell my house." the voice said but when it saw that Hana did not laugh it just Clear its throat "umm anyways on to the torture."(...)
it all went black of Hana then she saw something she would never imaging her.. parents.
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