/ Fantasy / The one who craves
Synopsis
Tired of the dull life he led, Allister decided to end it. But, instead of eternal rest, he was reborn in a world of magic and wonder.
A world where life thrived and death ravaged everything.
However, for all of its charm, this world was also cold and unforgiving.
Empires and kingdoms in turmoil, waiting for a chance to lay waste to Mundus for the sake of achieving power.
A stranger to this land, Allister, now reborn as Coy, has a bottomless curiosity that knows no bound, and he is hell-bent on demystifying the mystical, and unveil the secrets this world hides.
But what does fate have in store for him?
Take a gander at his tale and find it for yourself.
DISCLAIMER: This books is fictional and does not in any way link to earth.
P.S: The cover of this novel does not belong to me. If the owner of it wishes for me to take it down, I will do so gladly.
Note:- I’m on a mass editing mission currently, so don’t be surprised when you see a change in some areas.
You can contact me through my discord which is: Aranea_lilium#7289
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Write a reviewi’ve read the first and second chapter, and I have to say that this man has a talent for writing. He goes in depth with the character descriptions and easily explains to us how they feel. I feel like the story was moving a bit slowly, but I assure you all who are reading this that it is worth it to read through and learn more about the story.
So far the Writing quality is top notch besides a few minor grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm not sure about the stability of updates since this is the first day of reading this and it only has 7 chapters. the story Development is flowing well and doesn't show any holes so far. The character design hasn't really kicked off due to the novel being so new and young. The world background is also pretty solid so far and I hope it stays that way. Overall I gave this novel a 4 due to it being so short but don't worry Author-nim keep going and maybe in 30 or so chapters I'll come back and give you a full 5 stars.
Read the first chapter, not bad. It was interesting and told very well. I do want to know why the Mc decided to die or why he needed to quickly leave the auction? Him being a vampire tho turned out to be a nice twist, but I want to know what year we’re in. As for issues, a description would be nice. What is going on? What is the basic gist of the book? You also have some issues with the the dialogue such as confusing “their” and “there”. And sometimes “” will be in the middle of dialogue. Also just for reader ’s appeal, the novel says what chapter you’re on automatically. Yours currently look like Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Departure You see how weird that is… Adding to that, not sure if you’re writing on a computer but thoughts and dialogue are separate paragraphs. On an mobile device, it’s all together as a block of text while I’m sure on a computer it looks separate.
Reveal SpoilerOverall I like the novel and enjoyed the parts of it but due to slow update i felt disconnected with the story. I read it long ago just here to give a review on what i thought. Hope we get more of the story
Hmm someone recommened me after reading 1st chpater it was good need some more work but altogether it was a good read i will continue and see it later how it goes cause release is monthly as i checked
Story is kinda similar to what i read in past somewhere put overall the pitch of story and everything good. Hope you post weekly instead of montly or quaterly
Ok interseting novel so far will be waiting for more to release here....[img=recommend] I will recommend other to read this so that Author get more motivation to write
I must say that I have been enjoying the novel quite a bit so far. The stories characters and world are interesting and rather ritch to say the least.
Author Aranea_lilium
Greetings. This novel is my first ever novel, so I might mess up here and there. I don't really have much to say here. But I hope everyone who stumbles on this novel gives it a chance. Who knows? It might be to your taste, or even a hidden gem you find exhilarating. Now I will end my rambling here. Welcome aboard on this magical, yet mystical novel of a vampire who offed himself but got reborn in a world of wonder. Peace✌️