ZAJ: Glory of Mankind

LV 4

pervy_sloth

pretty good so far, I'd recommend you to not make him a jack of all trades unless you want him to be op, since you're going for Hercules you could make him incredibly strong and very skilled in combat but I don't think you should make him perfect, reading about an overpowered, flawless mc with no weaknesses gets boring pretty quickly

LV 4

Deimesu

The heaven did I just try to read ??!!??

LV 13

Madeycade_Cade

Can you plz stop this you are disresp ecting Islam so plz stop 🛑 🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑🛑☹️😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

LV 5

LifelessMan

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LV 2

Dragon_forever

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LV 1

Xiphos_Gladius_03

So far, everything is going swimmingly. I believe you should give MC something akin to Spartans Rage, as well as one of Kratos' weapons like the Blades of Chaos or the Leviathon axe. It would aid him to go Kratos on Hades.

LV 1

Red_Streaker

Hello everybody author here. I was t everybody to give an honest and detailed review in what I should improve on. Like if you don't like my story, tell me whyand how should I correct it. I want to succeed in being a writer and this will help me a lot. The k you for your time.