/ Sci-fi / The Mistakes
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Two newly born-again cousins put everything on the line to embark on a journey to make lives, discover and fulfill their God-given purpose as they become wanted international criminals in a dystopian futuristic city full of corrupted over-exaggerated superpowered entities.
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this reminds me of marvels and dc. superheroes with powers set in a futuristic dytopian kinda world. if you like those themes, this book is a must read. other than the fight scenes which could be improved there is nothing much to criticize. keep up the good work [img=recommend]
FASCINATING !! The story line is great with unique plot. It makes you reminiscencent your childhood. I am definately adding this to my library and will keep reading !! GREAT WORK !! KEEP UP!!
It's a very good book so far, reminds me much of childhood and fantasies of superheroes. Good work keep it up but please don't keep readers waiting for long. I am anticipating for the conclusion. Keep up with the good work.
It is a great book with a really great start. The story will be a hit if the author makes the cover more attractive. But the story is super good. Recommend!
First off, I'd like to commend the author's talent in writing compelling scenes. The sentences were smooth flowing, it made me forget that I was reading a book. The only downside is the long paragraphs, it made my eyes tired. So all I can say is to shorten those long paragraphs or divide them. Don't hesitate to start a new paragraph. With that said, good job.
Great book with a great start. I can see a promising work here from a great author. Good Job and keep up the good work. 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
There's a bit about heroes, a bit about friendship and the strong bonds between family. It is paced out slowly to build up the story so one might need to take time to read and immerse into the characters' life. All in, good effort by the author! Keep it up.
Okay good story .The story is slow paced but has good potential .I'm giving review after reading 7th chapter . Keep it up author and update more chapters !
A beautiful story so far, the story flows so gently making it seamless and attractive to the readers and you get the chance to settle in and enjoy the story as a whole with its characters. A good read
the synopsis is very interesting and it makes you curious to want to read the novel. the plot is very unique even while being a 'superhero' story. the powers and origin stories as well as the fall of civilization into a dystopia is very well written and the world-building is vividly explained. best of luck to the author :)