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Immortal World System

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Author: _Yuvi_

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Hao Ren a regular otaku walkup and found himself lying on the hospital bed. He found that he had an immortal world system accompanying him. But,...
Whenever he tried to gain points by killing insects or cattle.
System notify him: "You have killed an insect, 0 experience points are rewarded"

the system said hauntingly: "Don't take me as leveling system of novel where you level up martial arts killing insect and cattle, humph, you have to practice, handwork in particular field to get experience points"...
Will the system brings Hao Ren fortune or bad luck?

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Iam_Cat

I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem. The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.

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C1yde
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I like how the author made plot to tell the education related stuff, it's hilarious to me 😂 I had a good laugh. Give it a try to the chapters you got for free guys! Story development and character development are 2 things you can't underestimate in novel like this.

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AJONAFXX

I love the synopsis and the title. So as the characters features and attitudes. They really act the way the author want it and they deliver it very good.

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1

i love itttt! because of the comedy as much as because of the adventure! im having a good time reading it! keep it up author! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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eyaggelia146

Some parts are a bit chaotic and confusing. I also think the flow is too quick and the story needs more descriptions.However,the idea has potential. Keep it up!

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Yulinda246

Good story. The main character a bit wishy washy. But I believe in character development. Hopefully he can become strong as soon as possible! Many typo. But its okay!!

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leorichard2021_0515

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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leoreview1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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