Girl in the town

Phenomenal!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 I really like the concept👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌Hats off to you❤❤❤❤❤I just don't have words to express my feelings.Amazing!😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌I just want to say one thing that *keep it up*

Ashmita It was really good! And I had to agree the fact that the story is very intense and interesting!! You qre doing great keep it up!💜💜💜💛

You are amazing Ashmita, your Imagination is fabulous, Your Imagination power will help you reach higher heights, And I am so extremely excited, curious to read the further chapters. Please post fastt..... This Novel is so interesting thing....ahhh Please post the further chapters fast...... Love Love Keep Growing......💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❤💜❣😍😍😘😘😘😊

The thinking was amazing! Loved it❤❤.And I loved the thing than how she believed in her dreams.It was really perfect😍😍😍😍😍😍✌✌✌✌✌✌✌❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

The story is interesting..very good ashmita!!! It's greattt..i don't have much things to say...what should I say more....But the story is wow!!!!

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Lulu_Mather

Nice book

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T3rrence_

While reading a noticed a lot of issues haha. The initial idea of the story is pretty good, but it's been used before. Many times before. A business man, driven so much by work, his social life is emptier than my brain during an exam, falling in love with a lowly girl who loves to dream big, but is hindered by the pressure people, her mother, even her best friend, give her. romance + life issues + love triangle = good plot okay but we could've written it better. Maybe stretch to multiple chapters all the story we've covered so far. Without proper setup, best friend love triangles and simple life issues can be interpretted differently with different setups. How long were they best friends? or how rich exactly is our guy? does he have a picky family? what's their everyday life like? I have many questions with only surface level answers. I'm sorry if I may seem harsh haha. Another thing is plot-pacing and character building. Maybe we should've spent the first chapters introducing our characters hehe rather than jumping to the meeting. We should give very proper and vivid descriptions of our characters that when we see the name "Rose", I don't just see a name, but I see the girl and her personality and I see who she is and how she looks like. You know what I mean? Yeah, Sorry I went overboard haha. I just wanted to.. well.. make a review haha. That concludes my review :D

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JanSaetPgntln

The initial storyline is great, writing style is superb, characters were executed greatly. Looking forward for more chapters! [img=exp][img=exp]

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Laz_Bee

you are good, the story going well and smooth.. Keep going, its an interesting idea [img=recommend]. i like the way the main charachter on trying to keep her dreaming[img=update]

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Xiaoru

Good story . Teen love ..and dreams ! Keep it up author . I hope there's a love triangle hahaa . I like the character Rose .Want more drama ..

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Sain_

hmmm................not bad for a new writer...................... i think the chapters should be of more length........ except that good story.................

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_Blue_Iris_

The quality is ok................but it can be better.................the plot is very thin but...........................as the story progresses it will get better. Good job author!!