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Chapter 3: Chapter 1

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"..." Speaking

'...' thought

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3rd POV

"AHHHHHHHHHH"

Screams was heard through the forest as one doctor inserted a needle to a boy's hand.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

"QUIET DAMN IT!!"

The doctor lost his patience and punch the boy then, soon leave and locked the cell. He soon passed through a cell which has been occupied by a sleeping boy.

The boy soon stirred and turning, after A few seconds. He then lift his arms to his face and woke up.

??? POV

'Where am I? ''What is this place? 'I soon got up and looked around,'this place is so white.....'.

???: "HELLO?"

I shouted to get the attention of the person outside but, soon left disappointed as I didn't hear anyone respond. But, soon my disappointment vanish and replaced by horror as I heard someone screamed bloody murder from the side of the wall.

I run to it and place my ears onto the wall. I heard.... VOICES!! I was gonna call for help but, dismissed the idea as the voice was talking to the other person.

Doctor 1 :"it seems like this one failed too, should we disposed of him?"

Doctor 2 :"we should before, the body could rotten"

I heard rustling and doors being opened and then, silence

I was horrified on what I heard before thinking 'what is this place? I only remembered me dying...' I looked around the room before deciding to escape from here.

'but, I don't know how' I started to look around and found a hole that could see the other room, I sprinted there and place my eye to it.

My vision adjusted to the light and soon I saw a person laying there. I tried to call out to him but, failed due to him snoring

David:"...."

Lets just leave him there until, then I sat down on my bed and soon drifted to sleep....

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But, before I could I heard a loud bang, I jolted out of my bed and looked around again. Soon my eyes stopped on the little hole as I saw a little eye.

I crawled there and sit Infront of it. I try to start the conversation but, he bet me to it.

??? : "Hey, why are you here?"

I paused for a moment not knowing what to say before responding

David : " I-I don't know I just woken up here"

The boy paused and soon whispered "that's strange...."

I was confused and questioned him

David : "what do you mean by 'strange'?"

The boy flinched at the question but answers me

??? : "All the children here was kidnapped so, I was surprised when you said that you don't remembered"

I thought a little bit before asking

David : "then, where are you from?"

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??? : "I was walking down the street before a masked man put a rag on my mouth and I passed out, now I woken up here.....in this room"

I feel bad for the boy before asking again

David : "what's your name?"

??? : "My name is Oscar" " what's your name?"

David: "my name is.....my name....is"

I tried to remember but, everytime I tried my head would hurt

???: "Hey hey! Are you okay?"

I snapped out of it and said

David: "I can't remember my name...."

???: "Well, why don't I give you one?!"

He grins at me and looked at me expectantly

I tried to refuse but, when I see those eyes I just couldn't, I soon give in and said yes.

He was excited before, trying out different names, and when he said that name, I immediately stopped him and said

David: "that one"

???: "Really? Koro?"

I nodded and soon we were talking for hours. Someone bang the door and told us to sleep, or else. I don't know what 'else' mean. So, we called it a night and sleep on our bed.

That's the longest I have write on a first chapter.

I'm proud of myself though

Hope you enjoy my lovely readers!!


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