Supreme Football System

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JARVIS_ultra_99

Well am the author so I have got to give myself 5stars And am going to try to maintain update stability So if u have any suggestions concerning the trajectory of the book please drop a comment

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AbdAzim

you are my fire .the one desire. believe when i say. i want it that way. tell me why.. tellll mee whyyyy.. teeeellllll meeeee whhyyyyy.. i want it that way.

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_ST_8244

this novel has potential but one thing lacking is the consistency of updates in order to draw more readers which you have to improve. Right now the plot is still developing an advice is to not skip the youth matches or even lets say skip all his age group randomly you can progress and create a lot of plots by in each age group which means more chapters and longer novel. But also he could be called up for his international team. an advice i can give is to write the whole story i was you introduce that he was called a genius when he was younger but got to arrogant or cocky and even got injured at a young age when he was 7 or something but this time he goes back to the past being just born or being 3 years old and this time puts effort and trains himself with those little football clubs and develop his skills and with his knowledge he can be called a genius which will gain him a youth club to teach him or instead just keep practicing training until he's 10 then go for a trial that's for age 12 or 13 which makes him known and get scouted to come England or the character is based already in England and joins arsenal academy. Also a big thing is that in all ages for the youth he plays i suggest making the youth plot longer write about all the ages instead of time skipping as that's pointless and also he could get called up for England and nigeria he chooses Nigeria which is 13 tournament or something and keeps playing for them then also plays for England this would be an international clash plot as he doesn't know who to represent but until 16 he then chooses which is up to you again. If you have seen greatest of all time then you know its stability of updates is good but a negative was the time skip after youth tournament which could've have been developed and you have a chance to

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TrikoRex223

Tory has a lot of potential, plot also seems quit interesting but due to few chapters and not a reglar upload you can’t really tell how the story will develop. Hope the auth gains some inspiration and sets up a scheduled upload so we are not left waiting wondering when we will get another chapter. Keep doing what you do quit enjoy the pace of the story, can’t realy judge the world building as MC has not shown us much. Thank you

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sam_dutt

Good novel. Author must continue and please don't the story....................................................................................................................................................................

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kobeblackmamba

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