tensura reborn

Great work update and for the update at least you have to do what you want with it I will send it in the update that the update I will be at the same thing as last time I was there for the update

Good storyline the way that the whole thing comes together it a really good fanfic [img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] man though the update is really slow and arrange the chapters better

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Queen_kris24

Good novel but its begin is somehow the same as the rest not really unique but has a nice storyline which makes u want to read more hi there I was wondering if you could send some pictures of Ultimate skill set and I will be there at SMAK got the job at least you have a good education and experience letter and resume for the post of assistant professor and I will believe it was real good at least you can do it

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KristoPherus

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Queen_kris24

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KristoPherus

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Queen_kris24

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Queen_kris24

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larny_craft

I only ask that you keep trying, don't let the writing fall, it may be that at certain times you get stressed and the comments won't help, at some point you're going to screw it up, but keep trying, every effort pays off. I have seen very few tension fan fiction tension fan fiction, of which I can rescue very little, but you should always try to improve and give surprises, plot twists and those things, or the reading can become boring and super monotonous. And as I have been saying, do your best and I wish you the best (I don't know how well this is translated since I speak Spanish)

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Cypher_Riser

It Seems cool based on the chapters that are currently out. Please dont weaken him randomly or make him be a hero that saves everyone he can. Love it so far though

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leorichard2021_0515

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

Good story, it can improve but with excellent argumentative writing. I didn't like tenseness due to power levels (goku beats him) but your story is true to the original, for the most part, and that's fine keep up your story and you will go far... missing when Goku?

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Christ_Apostle

boring ...................................