Summoner's Kingdom

LV 1

ImNex

Author just need practice and experience. He's already pretty good at writing dialogues or describing the scenarios. Some issues I found is that author can be abit rush with the descriptions, the way characters express their feelings or say things. Don't be nervous about if people might not read your fanfic. Just keep writing the best you can and keep developing the skills. Don't get overwhelmed by the criticisms that come at you and drop the fanfic. Most newbie in webnovel do that. You must know that even if you drop the fanfic, you can't delete it from the system lol. So just continue and try to reply your readers as much as you can. Build a community and one day, you'll be ready to start your own novel and make money. Ofcause, this is a long term goal. Don't make your goals too big and get overwhelmed or depressed as well lol. Anyway good luck. 5 stars from me.

LV 4

Kurogane_Yukihiro

Not very good at reviews here but I give you a five. Your work is actually better than most fanfic that had secret class in it. I only wish for more updates hahaha. Imma keep voting to motivate you then.