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I want to continue this but I don't have time since I work overtime. Teaching kids at school and the business I manage. For those who is waiting for the chapters, I'm sorry but I don't have time to write. I know there are problems with my novel as I read it my own so what I plan for this fanfic is to revise it and make it more better, eliminating the wrong grammars and making the story more better than this. I will upload when my time loosen up. Thank you.
Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development:⭐⭐⭐ Character Design:⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability:⭐⭐⭐ World Background:⭐⭐⭐⭐ Sigh, first of all, my intention of writing this review isn't to offense the author or anyone else for that matter, and I'm just stating my opinion and a fact, if you don't like it so be it. okay let's get into the problem, the first one is how the mc is tooooo op for HOTD world and I bet when the canon start there's nothing that can stop MC and every fighting scene the MC just gonna steamroll it or holding back so the fight scene will be seemingly interesting so this fanfic gonna be your typical Pokemon collecting. (If I'm wrong then that's mean I'm incompetent) the second problem is that how the girl, I mean EVERY girl easily blushes because of the MC for no reason (I get it that MC is handsome but still), and I don't remember HOTD girl is that cheap, or maybe I'm the one who is forgetting something? I don't know man. the third problem is how Rei shares her problem with a guy she is just known for around 2 days ago as if they were a best friend, also a headstrong girl like Rei isn't going around and telling anyone who saves her, and because of that she shares her problem with a stranger and crying because of it. to sum it up the story is not bad if you just gonna shut your brain off and think with your lower half, you could certainly enjoy the story more, but too bad I lost my interest in chapter 4 maybe I'm gonna back when I decided to think with my lower half. ( I could be wrong because I stopped reading at chapter 4) Pls don't delete the review and don't be discouraged because of this review of mine, have a good day, and see you later.
i like the book so far the first chapter was hilarious. the updates are a little slow i just wish the the updates was alittle faster but you cant rush greatness keep up the good work and i hope the author has a nice day every day.[img=update]
Author san this fan fic of HOTD is best I have seen I hope that I continue on this story if it's alright can u update more chapters daily as the story is so good that I have run out of chapters
At the moment it's good, nothing original to a Hotd fanfic but what we need to this fanfics are that the author don't leave it or dropped the novel, at least make a good numbre of chapters to make people see your good points, and don't forget +18 parts, these are my favorites.
Yup, this is cliché but it's ok. I hope you develop in the future so that it's not too cliché👌 ................................................................
Character Design 2/5 Ok, MC is OP; but, MC is beta, virgin, gay?... MC is japanese character beta. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
the story is not that great it starts well enough but then it tends to get worse author creates chapters with different POV every now and then, mc had 3 wishes but then he had a system and op stuff, things are not explained like percentages on mastery , mc should be a genius and learn fast but it seems to defy logic itself, can create intelligence in a few months and at the same time learn medicine, singing, languages, engineering, genetics and more! mc seems to have incredible progress in whatever it is to learn and relationships, the characters are a little different from the original HOTD and every now and then some parts of the story are weird like when he hacks the professor's phone while he teleports home his and puts a tape recorder on him and after some time he learns hacking (first hack and then later he learns hacking) also how the phone was there unattended at home is strange, the dialogues are few but I hope they increase (it seems that the story is the thought of mc), mc is beautiful too but this does not mean that every girl should like it, fall in love or blush every moment she smiles she has no special skills or anything else I understand that the author wants to accentuate the fact mc has a beautiful face but so it gets repetitive, HOTD besides shizuka who is dizzy shouldn't think like other school anime where every girl blushes the update is a bit slow and the length of the chapters varies a bit, however it is a nice story to pass the time even if the author should fix and improve something
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good chapter and history. **********************************************************************************************************************************************************
Since I'm shameless I'll rate it complete stars. Hope you like the story.