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My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer
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Luke is a half-beast who grew up in the twisty streets of a large city called Oukiwa. Abandoned by his parents as a child, he soon had to learn the arts of thievery to survive.
Even on the fringes of a super-powered society, he has followed a single rule all his life: never get involved with the Adventurers.
However, this rule is broken when his gang begins to hatch a plan to rob the most powerful family in town.
And so begins the chronicles of Luke Lange, a thief with no ancestors who in the future becomes one of the strongest men in history, with powers that are rivaling even the gods.
Main Tags: Harem, Weaktostrong, Male MC and Adventure.
Schedule: 7 chapters/week.
Chapter length: 1000 - 2000 words
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A truly promising novel. Those new elements really hooked me. I'm looking forward to how the story and the romances will unfold. I recommend it.
Do none of you recognize the character in the COVER? Seriously? .. ... ... . .. .... .. ... .... . .. . ... ... .. . ... ... .. .. ..... ...
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Author-san do you mind changing the name of the book? I picked up the book because of the title yet nothing related to the title has come up even the synopsis is not related to the title. All together it's a great and promising novel despite the errors once in a while
After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel free to do a review: Writing Quality - Despite making mistakes in some things that I think are normal, the author manages to develop the paragraphs very well, always connecting them in a way that makes us read quickly and fluidly. Stability of Updates - Very good! Chapters every day is the minimum I ask to give 5 stars. Story Development - For now? Perfect. It managed to insert many good mysteries and is also not making the script predictable, because it is always breaking a clichรฉ here and there. Character Design - Very good. Although I miss the descriptions of the characters' clothes, it contributes to the fluidity I commented on in the first topic. The characters' personalities also pleased me, because humanity shines through. World Background - It hasn't developed the whole world yet, but the cities it has developed seem really cool and alive. A great novel, with a very promising future. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything develops and maintains quality.
Look, I have two points to highlight in my review. First - The pace is very good, especially at the beginning. Nothing seems to get dragged and when I think the good parts are over, the story amends into another very good flow. Second - The syntax is not the best I've ever read, but it still remains good for them and well understood. Finally, I recommend you read this work this, because it is already very good, and I look forward to seeing how it will be in the future when you have more fame.
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I barely started reading. I'm just rating solely due to the cover picture. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. . .. .. ..
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The story seems very interesting (I read up to the 22nd chapter). It is a shame that sometimes the author uses the wrong pronouns and other similar mistakes, but it's still readable.
So after reading for some time I feel like it's time to give my two cents. I will not write a long review just some basic information this time, The story is good and somehow unique but you will find the action scenes lacking. Character designs is well done in my opinion. I find the MC cute. World background is a fantasy medieval setting that gives you a typical isekai feeling, It's not too bad with adventurers and stuff like taverns and etc, Update stability is good. Now as for the writing quality. Despite the people who previously praised it. Its actually bad to be honest. I spotted several grammatical mistakes and nonsense sentences. Aside from this, I will continue this story as it is still readable and I like it, however I can see why it's not popular as well.
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Reached the end of free chapters so I'd figure I'd comment on how it went. This novel is written decently well, and the story it leads is interesting and fulfilling. The only thing that could help this novel a bit more would be an increase to the world development and background. Other than that, its a good novel worth checking out.
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Amazing how addictive this story is! I started reading and I'm here every day waiting for more. This here really needs to become an exclusive and have an editor, because it's a mistake a story with this and a plot like this, not having an even higher quality of grammar.
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This novel is pretty good. Their romance is definitely on the right level and all potential harem members are awesome. I think the bed scenes could be written in more detail. Definitely a novel worth reading.
The novel is good im still at chapter 65 so you can just half trust my review. Although there are some gramar mistakes its not to the point you cant understand it besides it doesnt even matter anymore because once you started reading you cant stop because the story is so good.
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this review is more of a question to people who have read the story, from what I understand from the synopsis the mc is an artist/thief who was created from magic like a homunculus and is strong enough to rival the gods of this world. what it doesn't mention are the girlfriend the story is named after, what types of godly powers our mc has or why a magic created being decided to become a thief. the synopsis seems so gibberish that i can't bring myself to commit time to the novel to find out if the author put any more effort in on that end so if someone can give me a better synopsis then I'll come back and try reading it.
Just dropping by to give every author the classic 5 stars! This is my first time writing a big, long novel, so I do my best to plan the script, the characters, the consequences of the MC's actions, and everything else. I hope you enjoy it! I am not a Native English speaker. So, of course you will find some grammatical errors and when you spot one, let me know through the comments tool and as soon as possible I will correct it. Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions. Enjoy your reading!