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Chapter 3: 1 Chapter After 1st Chapter.

[ TRISTIA POV ]

After skewering the outer god ,who begged me for forgiveness which only fueled my anger more and i decided to not to kill him immediately so i skewed him with divine spear and put him near a supernova star just at the distance that his skin would burn but can be regenerated immediately thus he should burn or roast all his life.

So after skewering the outer god i came back in my dimension which can only be described as natural paradise with long waterfalls ,crystal clear water, fresh air which can strengthen a normal mortal's body to the level where you can say he/she is using Touki skill passively , and the sky was blue and cyan in color and there are trees with fruits which can equaled to golden apple in greek mythology.

Tristia came and falls on her back on soil bed and began gazing at the sky thinking about all that has happened to her , her most joyful time of her entire life as the image of her cute son flashes across her mind creating a beautiful smile on her face and then as if she had adrenaline shot's she stood up cast her gaze on earth's direction, soon begin seeing her son and as time passed her mood became sour... why? because her son was alone and unattended 'WHERE THE FUCK IS THAT USELESS WORSHIPER!!!' she thought.

Then before she can do anything her father the one that is only equal to her in power suddenly appeared outside her dimension why not directly inside?? well it's because he is equal not more powerful than her that's why.

She than allowed him inside the dimension as he appeared before her one can describe him as more slim and wrinkly dumbledore who was wearing simple light brown colored robe.

" Tristia you are needed in creation of one universe immediately."

"I can't i am busy!"

"If you don't come our efforts will be wasted!! Don't be childish and come immediately!"

"I won-"

as she was about to refuse again she then looked at her old man there was urgency and frown on his face she then carefully examined the situation, if she were to refuse him and made him angry it can turn into fight and at this moment her dimension is very close to earth and thought that if a fight were to break out it will be minimum on universe destruction level and if earth were to be destroyed so will her son be...at the mere thought of it make her lose all colors of her face and then although reluctantly she agreed while thinking that she will be back in jiffy.

"Ok, let's go!"

she them disappeared from her spot .

"hmmm?"

the GOD raised his eyebrow while thinking about his daughter's urgency and unusual behaviour and while not coming to any conclusion he frowned and also disappeared.

Unfortunately for tristia her jiffy would be 200 years later as the work took too long and while working she forget the sense of time . You maybe thinking that she can can stop the time as she time as divinity, but she said 'what kind of mother stop's her sons growth' and thought she will give herself a surprise when she came back and found her son wonderfully matured , and there is still that puny mortal 'WORSHIPER' of hers who will give him a luxurious life and care.

/( Little did she know...)/.

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[ 3rd person POV ]

Kaal's soul was wandering the space simply drifting in an ocean of darkness without an end just then kaal's eyelid flickered and then slowly his eyes opened his thought's filled with confusion and anger and fear as he thought-

' why can't i see anything '

'is this afterlife'

'don't tell me... am i reincarnated and born as blind!!!...'

He got panicked and thought that his suffering will begin with 1 level higher difficulty just what has he done to gain such bad karma. Since in the stories ,novels and anime he read and watched he had seen that even heinous criminals , some random nobody who just donated some pitiful amount of money, heck even some fat rap*st bastard got op wishes and got reincarnated and live a fulfilling life.

Then what it is that he lacked he matched every condition heck he even matched some unsaid condition if there is any like

1:>Tragic life --> CHECK

2:>Killed someone-->CHECK

3:>Loner's life--->CHECK

4:>Died tragically-->CHECK

5:>Died through rammed through( technically deer who sent him flying)-->CHECK

6:>Opened lot's of orphanage throughout world and give his last amount of money to them-->CHECK

Thus all conditions have been fulfilled 'THEN WHY?!?!'

Kaal was enraged but can do nothing as he thought that soon someone will come to take him out of his misery. If only he had known that he will be floating for 200 years than he would have coughed blood due to anger even if he is just soul.

Thus he choose to do something meaningful then he began doing different things such as backflips, dance moves, martial arts(sparring a self imaginary opponents, basically kick-punch and avoid hit).

But much to his dismay no one came and as he has already loss sense of time here there was something within him that was on verge of breaking it was his sanity and the only thing that was keeping him going forward was his willpower which was tempered with his horrific life ,then suddenly a bright light shone in midst of darkness as the space itself begin shake from there came someone...


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
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Creation is hard, cheer me up!

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