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The torture system

Author: Bruce_Kirt

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Chapter 1: The Deal

*BING* welcome to hell

I slowly open my eyes and you know what I felt? pain and more pain. For a endless amount of time. Mabey months mabey just a hour. Then it stopped and I could open my eyes. And I saw a blue green screen. And my eyes widened as it said welcome to hell. I screamed and tried to escape but I was tied down. then I heard a bored and condescending voice "it is futile those are demon infused ropes a mortal like you could never break them". then he walked in my view he had black horns whith a red suit. black greasy hair like a shady salesman. I knew he was the devil. then he said problem his favorite words "I propose a deal". "what deal" I said cautiously know deals was his forte. " don't be a stickler relax" he said calmly then snapped his fingers and was transported to a elegant room. whith old flower wallpaper whith a golden plated table whith elegant floral teacups. then a teapot appeared and poured two cups of boiling water. then a teabag appeared inside. and sugar appeared in cube form in the middle of the table. " so I know you like all sinners want to get to heaven right" the devil said while sipping the tea. " yes and I want to know my sin's to repent". said nervously whith my back tight whith tension. " mhmm" he said "stop being so tense take a sip of the tea or we can't have a conversation". I took a sip. it was a full it was bitter and tasteless. the tea was boiling I tried putting sugar in it but it just made it more bitter. the devil was clearly amused.


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