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This is a multiverse travel story
(I DO NOT OWN NOTING BUT MY OC )
(I don’t own the cover if you are the artist lmk if you want me to take it down )
First world: marvel earth 616
Post when I feel like it
Also the mc will stay female
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worst kind of fanfic. waste of time. don't bother reading it. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
You had the right idea for sure, I would genuinely read it, but your execution wasn't very good. I would say you need to drag out the chapters, like a lot. At least let your mc spend a few chapters in one world before moving on. All in all, it just needed some work and I hope you decide to continue this in the future. Just know this is just my personal opinion and. P.S: I forgot to write a review before so I'm going off of what I remember from the Story.
its not bad but its also not good the story feels like its all over the place and like its missing alot of info over all i guess its "ok?" for a first time?
2/5stars, ........................................................................................................................................ nuff said
add a gender bender tag