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Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Make this world fear the name of Ainz Ooal Gown the ruler of death, new enemies and allies appear.

A/N: VERY IMPORTANT apparently you can get up to 100 levels per player in YGGDRASIL and each level you can either get something new or upgrade something you already had and apparently cannon Ainz used his : Necromancer(10), Ruler of death(10), Elder lich(10), Skeleton mage(15) overlord(5), Apocalyptic deity (?, unknown), Eclipse(5), Dark Bishop(?, unknown), God of chaos(?, unknown), world disaster (5) so as you can see only 60 levels were used not counting the unknowns, so i've decided to use put +5 for each unknown making it 75 and so i still have 25 levels that i can use as i wish and i have decided to use 5 of those levels to give naruto a new race incubus(5), ninja(10) there is still 10 more levels i will let you guys pick what you want it to be used for just comment down below and i will pick the most interesting one :)

"Glory to lord Ainz Ooal Gown" speech.

'All hail lord Ainz Ooal Gown' thought.

Now that my plans to take over the world are nearly complete let's get started

It has been 3 days since the tomb of nazarick had been teleported to the new world to this new world and to say that naruto had been in a endless amount of awkward situation was a understatement it had all started after he had given Mare a ring of Ainz Ooal Gown then naruto had changed his name from naruto to Ainz Ooal Gown but he also made a great revelation with this he had announced that he actually had a incubus race this was to make him basically have puppeteered magic but instead it was charm and this race gave him an unnatural amount of stamina not only because he was a incubus but because he was also a undead witch they never get tired so adding that race he could do anything and not get tired but this also had bafiired on him greatly as you see wherever he was in that trancforation all of the negative emotion to kill the living was transformed into sexual desire and so he had almost fucked albedo, shalltear and one time almost dragged a maid to his bed but barely stopped himself.

Naruto was currently sweating badly he was currently in his incubus form with Naberal Gama who was going by Nabe she was going by a ninjutsu user as you see they had learned that the location that they were in was called whirlpool country he had learned they they were attacked by the 3 great hidden villages but then he learned that the leaf village had betrayed them and that the people of the village were called uzumaki and so he decided to take that name so he could have a excuse to attack the other villages without it being automatically be seen as world conquest.

Naruto was currently in his room as he was reading a book it was not like the regular books but instead it was a item from YGGDRASIL it was a special book connected to the library of nazarick this book was like the whole library put together and now that the library had gotten new books from the ruins of uzu naruto was doing his best to be as caught up as posible and he was almost done but he suddenly stopped and put the book back in his inventory.

Naruto readied himself as he used the ring of Ainz Ooal Gown and vanished appearing in front of the giant gate of the throne room he walked on the red carpet up to his throne and sat down on his throne he simply waited not minding Albedo who was still by his side with a loving smile on her face.

Naruto smiled back at her making her extremely happy seeing her master happily smiling at her.

Suddenly the giant gates of the throne room was opened and in walked 4 people the first one was Shalltear Bloodfallen the guardians of the first, second and third floors of the great tomb of nazarick, the second one was Keno Fasris Invern the vampire princess also Shalltears older sister, then Zesshi Zetsumei she was a powerful NPC created by ulbert alain odle she was a killing machine, she cared very little about most life she only cared for her master along with the other supreme beings and nazarick itself she is Demiurges half younger sister she was half demon and half elf, then lastly was the most dangerous NPC Rubedo she is a very special case as she was created by 2 world class items and could even beat touch me while he was wearing his world champion armor so she was extremely powerful and only followed albdo's orders due to her creators last order being to listen to albedo as if it was him and of course she also was loyal to Naruto.

The 4 female NPCs stopped a few feets away from the throne bowing down before their lord.

"I am glad that you have come."

"Lord."

"Zesshi Zetsumei, Keno Fasris Invern i have a mission for you 2 it is a mission of great importance"

"What is the mission my lord?"

"Keno i want you to go to the village known as konoha and infiltrate their rank use your spells to pass off as a ninjutsu specialist, Zesshi i want you to infiltrate the ninja academy in konoha, use your skills with your scythe to pass of as a kinjutsu master and i want you to focus on the son and daughter of the hokage gain their trust use whatever method you would like."

"Yes lord as you commend."

"Shalltear, I want you to go outside of the tomb and find a man named 'Zabuza Momochi' . He has a powerful sword called the executioner blade. I want you to retrieve it for me."

"It shall be done my glorious master!" Shalltear smiled knowing she was not ordered to bring back the person alive or any of his subordinates and so they were free game.

"Rubedo, I wish for you to accompany me on a mission. I wish for you to accompany me on a mission."

"Lord, if I may ask, what is this mission?"

"Yes, the mission it to destroy a village and kill a man known as orochimaru of the sannin, he is the only person in the world to my knowledge capable of using a pype of resurrection spell but his does not revive the person at full power and they are just as poppets but i do not wish for him exist anymore as he had sent a group of his ninjas here not long after we arrived and they were interrogated and apparently that nam is planning to destroy the leaf but i can not let it be destroyed yet so we need to eliminate him."

"Understood lord."

"Do you know where Slimeko is?"

"Yes i shall bring her to you my lord"

"You are free to go on your missions Zeeshi, kone and Kone while your in konoha use the name 'evileye' go to Demiurge he will give you the necessary papers for you 2 be able to join konoha, depending on how well you do i might decide to grant your wish Zeeshi "

The usually stoic Zeeshi blushed before she snapped out of it and bowed "Y-yes m-my lord."

The 4 females left but then Rubedo returned and a little girl was holding on to her leg. She is actually a pink oozing slime molded in a top hat. By pulling her inside out and shaping it, she can mimic the form of a human girl. When using this facsimile, it resembles a young pink-haired girl that wears black gloves, a belt with a skull, and a corset dress. Slimeko's actual body lies on its head as a peculiar top hat. Strangely, her fake body's face is emotionless, though her actual body if closely watched, stretches, and quivers in reaction.

Despite her lack of emotion, Slimeko has a cheery personality. She appears to have no racial attachments to other slimes outside of Nazarick, seeing them as below her. Additionally, she is somewhat of a glutton as she likes to sample a variety of delicacies she comes across, be it cooked food or a rotting corpse

(if you want to see what she looks like look up "Slimeko" or look in the comment i will post a picture in the comments)

As they got close to the throne the small girl suddenly let go of rubedo and started to run towards naruto smiling.

"Papa! Papa!"

"Yes, Slimeko."

Slimeko she was a NPC created by Naruto as his smart and energetic younger sister Pandora, Actor and Naruto's daughter.

She was the only female NPC in Nazarick who was not sexually atracted to naruto but she had a commend that said that "she is loves her Papa naruto very much."

Naruto hugged Slimeko with a smile on his face as he watched his overly entoastick daughter jump on his lap in excitement saying how her day had been and what she had done.

Slimeko was a strange slime as unlike solution she could mold her body and make herself much smaller or much bigger unlike her naruto who could only control specific parts while in her incubus form she could control her whole body however she wished.

Naruto and her talked for a while with naruto explaining what he had planned witch made her restless half way through Albedo had joined after Slimeko had created a opportunity for her by calling her Mommy she had squealed like a schoolgirl and started to frankly admire how cute Slimeko was making Ainz and Slimeko laugh in the end Ainz had said something that made her go over the top and pass out he had told her that she would make a great mother some day and her mind somehow changed to "you will be a good mother for my child."

Meanwhile hidden sound village, in an underground lab.

Orochimaru was meeting up with a very dangerous man. This man was Madara Uchiha, the ghost of the uchiha clan.

"So this is the experiment"

"Yes, she's quite the specimen but she is so stupid kukuku."

"That is fine, a weapon does not need to think only follow the weapons users commend."

"That is very true kukuku"

"Have you tried the process of the sea mosteron a zetsu or only this girl?"

"I have not created a perfect zetsu but i have found out how to infuse them with other DNA including the sea monster, sinju's, uchiha i do not know for a uzumaki as the group that i have sent to uzu to get the DNA of the fallen uzumakies have not returned."

"That's because I made sure that they would not come back by killing them."

suddenly a paper thin portal made of pure darkness appeared from thin air out of it a terrifying skeleton with a magesting purple robe appeared it was soon followed by a woman who looked to be in her late 18 years olds she had a small dress with a black cloak going down her back the dress had some black designs and she had a small black upside down cat ask with a red light coming from its eyes she was eating a unnaturally red apple but what truly scared them was a black mist shaped like a ghost with a skeleton face with skeleton hands eating a apple but it was holding a 2 bladed black scythe.

"Now just what do you mean by that?"

Ignoring the snake's questions ainz asked a question of his own "you plan to attack konohagakure for the next chunin exams?"

Narrowing his eyes dangerously, the snake asked his new question "How did you get such information?"

"That is not important but you shall not destroy the villages as it is an important part of my plans."

"Well it looks like you will have to make a new plan or join me."

"you misunderstand me, you see your standing between me and my goals so i will have to destroy you just like this pathetic village."

"You think you can kill me orochimaru the legendary snake sannin?"

"Yes, now then rubedo take care of that man with the mask don't let him interfere."

"Sir Yes sir"

Suddenly the figure behind rubedo vanished, Madara feeling the danger dodged as the figure reformed in front of him and tried to slashed at his side but missed.

Madara pulled out a small sword and tried to sash at the figure's face but as the sword connected with the skeleton's face the thing became nothing but black mist.

The thing appeared behind him and did a slash to the confused uchiha's back leaving a giant gash.

Stumbling forward the uchiha quickly recovered and turned around spinning and threw a kunai with a paper tag on it but the monster caught the kunai and the tage light up and exploded in her face but the monster just stared at the kunai but the it threw it back at the masked man but he did not move instead the kunai passed through him as if he was not there.

"Give up, you cannot defeat me, the great Uchiha Madara, GAAAAAH, what is this?"

Ainz raised his bonny hand and casted a spell "dragon lightning!" It was a simple 5th tier spell, a simple lightning bolt shaped like a dragon but unlike the regular jutsu this was as powerful as the most powerful natural lightning.

Seeing the dragon lightning coming at him orochimaru smoked and did a single hand sign this caused a powerful gust of wind to counter the lightning knowing lighting was weak to wind he thought it would have stopped and was surprised when the lightning continued and hit him but instead of turning him to ash like it would have done it only made him quite num.

Orochimru jumped away with his now limp hands to his sides.

"What the hell, how can you have such a powerful lightning jutsu, who are you?!" orochima was shocked and surprised but he had used his snake substitution to regurgitate himself but his bones still hurt from the spell.

"Ainz Ooal Gown, there was no one alive who did not fear this name in the past, but it appears that people have forgotten it so I shall make the world tremble and fear my name once again."

"You think you can make the whole world fear you? How strong do you think you are?"

"Yes, I did that before in the 9 worlds and I shall do it again! Now dies 'Grasp heart'" with that being said Ainz casted the powerful instant kill spell and the pumping heart of the snake sannin appeared in his hand and Ainz squeezed watching as the snake squirmed like a wurm and soon stopped as the heart exploded in a pull of blood.

The masked man watch with a shaked look under his mask as orochimaru was killed so easily that he could not even land a hit on his opponent but then he felt a footing pain on his chest he looked down to see the ghostly figure had his hand through his chest but that should have been impossible as he had his ability to make himself intouchable.

Ainz walked up to the masked man and was about to kill him when a weird white being came from the ground and attacked him. This distraction gave the masked man a chance to escape from them.

Sighing, Ainz looked at the figure which he had learned that he was a white zetsu by taking his memories for himself.

But when Ainz had tried to go back to killing the mask man he saw him being absorbed into a swirling vortex and had gotten away.

Seeing this Ainz was curious as to what that was but pushed it in the back of his mind and did something that would send a message to the entire world.

He used a "flight" spell and floated up over the village next to him was Rubedo she was done eating her apple and only the core was left.

Meanwhile in nazarick.

Demiurge was currently on his designated floor of nazarick the seventh floor it was not far from what you would expect from where a demon would live, it looked very much like the inside of a volcano the rocks were black, lava was running like rivers with many cracks in each stones and lava was coming from them there was many empty cages but they could fill a entire person in them.

"My lord, the preparations are complete. We are ready to receive the sheep." a small demon witch was flying using his small wings but he was

'Good now all we need to do is wait, I hope this will please my lord.' Demiurge thought to himself as he looked at the latest project he was working on due to his master asking for a constant supply of magical scrolls.

Demiurge smiled as he saw what he had been waiting for.

Back with Ainz.

Ainz raised his bonny hand and casted the 'gate spell' but unlike the previous times when he had used the spell it was big enough to cover the entire sound village and everyone in the village weather they lived there or were just visiting fell in but no building or object that was not on the people fell in.

'Hopefully they are enough.'

After a few second Ainz canceled the spell and nodded at Rubedo, she slightly bowed before she dropped the core of the apple that she had been eating, as the core dropped down it looked rather harmless but then when it hit the tallest building being the kazekage tower it started to break down and vanish into nothing but light particle.

10 seconds past the whole village of sound had be engoved by the bright light and then vanished leaving nothing behind.

"Good job Rubedo."

Naruto opened a gate and walked though it followed by Rubedo but he saw something that confused him, he saw that unlike the other NPCs when he would usually talk to them they would normally be happy and cheerful, but Rubedo seem to be off even though he had congratulated her she almost seem to not even hear his complement but Naruto did not focus on it all to much and decided to check on it later.

Sunagakure.

Rasa the current fourth kazekage of suna and wielder of the legendary golden sand.

Rasa was looking at a report that he was not happy about, the report stated that all of Otogakure was completely wiped off the face of the earth, the people all vanished, orochimaru was reported dead apparently killed by a powerful man known as Ainz Ooal Gown and that this man apparently wanted to challenge the world but he was not really worried about the man's goal as he did not believe he could achieve them but he was furious that his country was in a awful position due to its economy being really not in a good state then they had made a liance with Oto and lost a lot of money, they had plans to get back the money by attacking and destroying the leaf and splitting all the missions that would have gone to the leaf and separate any amount of money the leaf had in their treasury.

But now all the planning, all the citizens he had given to orochimaru to experiment on to make them have sand abilities like his son, all that money, all those ninjas in Oto everything was lost.

Slamming his hand on his desk the kage started to villantly curse. "DAMMIT ALL!! THAT BASTARD NOW THIS VILLAGE IS DONE FOR!"

"No on the contrary, it is just beginning."

"Who said that?" Rasa said, now on guard.

"You do not need to know that as you are nothing but a dead man."

Rasa frantically looked around but then he saw something that made his heart stop for a few seconds though the darkness of the corner of the room two purple eyes with black rings in them that seemed to be piercing through his very soul and then the hair it was… blood red just like… an uzumaki.

Rasa started to make the golden sand go toward the figure but it suddenly stopped as he left his body getting heavier when the figure dashed at him and started to pull something from his body. By the time that he realized what happened his body fell to the ground lifeless.

The figure watched as the body of the kage fell down and he looked at his hand to see that he was still holding on to his soul, he put his hand on the unresponding soul's head and started to scan through his memories before he smirked showing his shiny white teeths.

"Now that I have this, my plans can start."

Meanwhile at kumogakure.

A the fourth raikage the man considered to be the fastest man only rivaled by the fourth hokage due to his flying thunder god technique.

The man was staring at a report about the death of the snake sannin Orochimaru, the destruction of Otogakure, and that the person who killed him was Ainz Ooal Gown.

The raikage started to think of a way to get into contact with this man and see how he could use him for himself but then something made him shocked.

He jumped up when suddenly he heard glass shatter and something hit the wall across the window. It was a body, not just any body but the body of his younger brother B.

Shocked, the kage looked outside to see a figure covered in shadows; the only things he could see apart from the shadows were his deadly purple eyes with black rings in them and his crimson red hair.

The kage did not want to think about it but he knew it was true that the hair ment that he was a uzumaki and those eyes… They were the powerful rinnegans the eyes of the gods but little was truly known about them apart that whoever whilded them was basically god and if the body of his badly beaten brother was anything to go by then he knew that this man was not on his side.

"Who are you, what do you want?"

"I am Uzumaki Naruto, one of the last uzumaki alive and also a man who wants revenge on the four hidden villages for destroying my home but worry not I'm not here for that yet, just to send you a message for now."

"In months time I shall take away your 2 tails jinchuriki. You may choose to hand her over willingly and be granted a merciful death or suffer the consequences as in the end there is absolutely nothing that you or anyone in this world can do about it." With that being said, Naruto vanished in darkness like he was never there.

Meanwhile at Kirigakure.

Mei terume was having a bad day as she had just received the news that yagura decided to end the war and that his entire army, his generals and himself were making arrangements to lunch a full attack on her troops witch would completely wipe them out as they were greatly outnumbered by a lot.

"Lady Mei, a group of people want to meet with you."

"Bring them in." The door opened and three very strange people walked in.

The first was a tall man who was completely covered in black armor with two greatswords on his back, next was a brown-skinned beauty with an athletic look and red hair tied in two long braids. She wears a maid uniform with short sleeves and long black gloves with a skirt that has a long slit on its left side, revealing thigh-high white stockings. and lastly was a very beautiful girl, an elegant, snow-white skinned, black-pony tailed beauty.

"Who are you? '' Mei said, quickly changing into her business mode and did not sound as worried as she actually was.

I am Momon, said the man, I am Nabe, the black haired beauty said, and I am Lupus, said the red haired beauty.

Meanwhile, takigakure.

Fuu the container of the seven tails beetles has had quite a bad childhood and was very lonely, she was very mistreated as the people of her village had always tried to turn her into a weapon of the village.

Fuu was currently receiving a breathing and was in unbelievable pain, was she not used to pain and so was underestimating it? No, on the contrary she had been beaten daily half to death, staved, tortured and many many more horrible things but this beathing was diferent she was even thinking that she was dead at some points and were sure that today would be her last.

Fuu was currently chained to a wooden wall after she was caught by the villagers and ninja's alike they had started to use the usual method of punching her, kicking her and wiping her saying that they were taming "the demon whore."

But today a man who she knew, he was the father of the current village leader Shibuki. He is also the former leader of the village and also the man she hated the most in this world. Why? Simple he was not only the man who sealed the demon inside of her but he is also the person who leads all of the mobs that attack her, all the shop owners, everything bad that ever happened to her she knew he was a part of it not only a simple part but a very big part of it if not the one leading or the one who started it.

The mann walked up to fuu with a smirk on his face and he pulled out a knife put some of his chakra into it witch was fire and water fire being a surprise considering he was born in the village he proceeded to stab fuu making her eyes go wide, then the beating started again but this time they planned to kill her and she couldn't escape no matter how hard she tried because when she became the 7 tails holder as a baby this man and the elders of the village had put a seal on her making it so she could not leave the village without permission, that if she tried to attack them they could activate the seal and she would lose control of her body and just fall limp from the pain that will go through her whole body.

As fuu was beaten to the point that she could see a hallway though the darkness she could tell that it was the afterlife that she was dying, fuu's real body had been pushed to the limit all her bones were dislocated and broken, her arms and legs were pulled out of their sockets she had second and third degree burns, multiple stabs from knifes, kunais and swords her skull was cracked from the constant punches and slaps her head was to the side because her neck was broken and she couldn't move it her arms and legs were bent and twisted completely broken she laid there ready to die with nothing more to live for.

She watched as the people from the mob was about to quit literally cave her face in with a giant hammer but when it was about to hit her the man who was about to destroy her face and end her life started to scream, the man had a lot of muscles on his bones but this was too much for him to handle and he started to scream with everything he had.

Everyone looked at him confused by what was happening but they they saw it they would never forget what they saw the man's flesh started to bubble up and move like there something underneath it, then it burst his body covered in blood as many worms came from inside of him and started to eat him all his flesh and drinking his blood soon enough all that was left was bones and many bugs on the ground.

Soon a small feminen voice was heard "ohh there's nothing left to eat" the voice said sounding like it was pounting about something, "well then i'll have to settle for the rest then."

"W-who are you, where are you, what are you talking about?"

"Thank you for volunteering. you will be my dinner" said the voice, suddenly out of thin air a young girl wearing traditional Japanese attire. She has bright red eyes that never move or blink. She has mauve hair with twin chignons. She never exposes any bare skin except for her "face."

"What do we have here, look at you all broken." the new arrival said looking at the broken fuu.

"W-who are you?" fuu said in a drone -like voice.

"Oh so you're alive good, my master did say he would prefer you alive well let's make sure you stay that way." the new girl pulled a small scroll from her kimono and she threw it in the air and it dispersed in the air and fuu suddenly felt healed. Even her mental state felt fine but she still did not have a reason to live so she was currently living for nothing.

"Well then time to eat, yuri nee-san did tell me to stop playing with my food, so i'll kill you quickly."

Out of the giant sleeves of the little girl a giant centipede came crawling out followers by more than 100 bugs with wings and lastly a giant big came out but unlike the others this one stayed on her arm and acted as a sword.

The giant centipede made a giant circle stopping any of the villagers from escaping then the bugs started to attack but then the little girl jumped in and started to cut everyone open and let them bleed to death if they didn't die from the first blow.

Soon enough the only people alive were fuu, the man he hated the most and the little girl seeing this the girl raised the hand that did not have the bug sword on it and all the small bugs that were around came back into her sleeve and it expanded like a balloon.

"Bug bullet!" sundtly 2 of the bugs came shooting out like bullets and hit each of the and knee pads making him scream in pain and fall face first, as the man looked up he saw the same terrifying little girl approaching him with the same face that was just to emotionless to be real and true to his believe her face suddenly started to break open to revise a terrifying face it was nothing but the face of death itself and as he realized that there was no way it 8 giant purplle fangs that was previously her hair came down on him and started to pull the skin off his face pulling him closer than 15 smaller fangs representing her teeths started to eat him drawing him in the darkness of death.

The girl burped as her face remade her mask after she had finished eating her dinner.

"I hope I'll get praised and maybe some snakes for completing the mission" the girl started talking to herself and drool started to run down from underneath her mask but then she quickly wiped it and turned around when she heard Fuu ask her who she was and what she wanted with her.

"I am Entoma Vasilissa Zeta, a servant of my master lord na- Ainz, he has sent me to bring you to him."

"what does he want with me and i also cannot leave this village due to a seal that was placed on me."

Entoma suddenly pulled out a talensment and threw it at fuu, this was a special talensment created to destroy seals using lots of mana and the knowledge of seals of the uzumaki.

As the talensment hit fuu the seal instantly broke and she felt a lot of restriction lifted off her her as it had been keeping her not only as basically a slave but also it had stopped her bijuu from helping her much and now she was… free.

"Will you come with me to my master or will I have to drag you to him?"

End of chapter 3

How will team seven react to meeting shalltear bloodfallen guardians of the first, second and third floor of nazarick?

Will fuu go with Entoma.

What does Naruto/Ainz want with fuu?

What is Naruto planning to do with sunagakure? the only village which did not attack uzu.

What does "Momon, Nabe and Lupu" plan to do?

1. 1 was sitting down swinging his legs on the edge of the building that he was on looking at the orange with the swirling pattern and one eye whole.

2. Damn you! Caches his breath.

1. Oh, hey you survived, Welcome back!

2. Damn right I survived you bastard!

1. Hey since you survived, I'll be a good god and give you a gift.

2. What is it?

1. "This" throws the mask at 2.

2. Catches the mask. Isn't this just Tobi's mask?

1. Maybe appears behind 2 and kicks him off the building.

2. AHHHH FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK!

1. Better think fast.

2. Lets see, ahhh ummm yeah maybe that will work if not then…

2. Taps the eye hole in the mask and gets sucked into the kamui dimension but it isn't just cubes but the mask is now on the other side of a deadly parkour maze that leads to a battle arena and the mask to go back to the real world as the reward for winning and all of the spectator, staff, competitor were all 1s, 2 screamed enraged hating 1 with all he had.

1. The one who was still on top of the building jumped down the same place where 2 had fallen he cough the same mask witch had sent 2 to the kamui dimension and automatically created a copy of the mask in the other dimension, 1 put the mask on as he landed on a massive pool witch would have saved 2 and beat the world record for the greatest splash.

0. Oh 1 oh 1 oh 1 oh 1 come closer all of the most beautiful girls in existence came around 1 and started kissing him.

1. 'I guess you didn't want my gift well. I'll take it for you then HAHAHA' evil laugh.


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