Chapter 14: Sorry

My bad if I take a while to get chapters out, I have a really bad problem where I overthink. I want my story to be mine but I also want to get the story right so I got over detail after detail. Beating myself up about getting everything right to make sense. I love bleach I do but I don't know everything. If I get some things wrong or don't get some peoples personality down to a T I'm sorry. Cause this shit driving me crazy.