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THE COMMANDER

Author: the_red

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Chapter 1: The day of beginning

A kid who can only be called weak at every turn you see him can be said to be walking on the road if you want to see anything that is praisable about him is that face that has a sad but firm look that can make even the coldest woman melt if you look closely this kid is our protagonist though he may not realise it well till .....Kaboom....

it seems the world is coming to an end

(well just kidding how can the world come to an end when our handsome hero doesn't even showoff his handsome ness )

then the the ground that just shook violently seem to be split apart and our hero who should be seen with a sad face is trembling at this moment because he seem to continue falling inthis pit continuosly without any intention to step

and above the ground where our mc was standing before the ground where there must be a split is closing itself which can only be called ridiculous well excluding the dragons and people that are turning into what can only be called zombies

well our joke seems to be true and our Mc seems to die or did he. really


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