/ Fantasy / Necromancer of plague
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[Not my art on the cover if owner wants me to remove it. I will]
Noah is the son of the greatest disaster the world has ever seen.
Waking up in a cave with no memories of his name or past life. Join Noah on his adventure to learn more about his past and the world he woke up in.
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Write a reviewI have updated and revised everything from chapters 1-30 I would be a lot further but I had things to do and now im working on the updates.
Lots of potential here. Biggest issue is character and grammer. At the start, a lot of sentance structure errors. Run on sentences and no periods. Also, the main charactor feels robotic. He wakes up and isn’t fazed at all by the death around him. Cool powers and all. Just need to fix some stuff up to make it more readable.
Hello Readers, I planned on getting to 100 chapters before doing this, but I will be revising everything from the first chapters to current. I went back and looked at a lot of things and I noticed some chapters lack things while others are not to my liking. I also noticed although everyone has come a long way and are a lot stronger I never showed how they obtained power. For example Venessa and Izruk have beast pets and we don't know how they were obtained or how Turyn has gotten the information he has gotten or how he met Richard. So doing the next couple of months or however long it takes me I will be adding chapters and revising chapters and after I have built a story, and given solid foundation and good examples of everyones power before the war I pick up from where I left off.
Author Forgottenplague
This is my first try at writing anything really. leave a review all criticism welcome. .