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Chapter 4: Chapter: That which lingers in the dark.

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The figure cautiously analyzed Mathias,

it's discerning gaze tracing every detail of

his appearance. To the Figure, Mathias

appeared as a ethereal ghost-like silhouette

with several peculiar symbols strewn across it

"H-h-hu-man?"

The figure murmured, sending a soft

echoing whisper in the dark.

Mathias confirmed the Figure's remark,

"Yes. I'm human… or…" he paused. His words

were heavy with uncertainty as he looked to his

hands, which had a ghostly glow to them. It

wasn't just his hands either. He noticed his

entire body giving off the eerie glow.

Unbeknownst to Mathias the petite figure he

stood before, was what remained of a god

from a bygone age. The Figure had many

inquires but it's ability to form coherent sounds

had decayed over the millennia. Be that as it

may, there were other ways for the two to

communicate, the figure needed to transpose

itself in a way communication could be

possible. What it needed, was living energy…

and A touch was all it would take for the

befallen God to procure the living energy.

The cloak shifted as the Figure extended its

bandage covered hand towards Mathias.

"Pleasure to meet you-" Mathias began an

introduction mistaking the Figure's gesture as a

greeting; he shook the bandage covered extremity.

"&*•#%%+*\>!"

An insurmountable wave of static noise

overcame Mathias' conscious, as the Figure

tightened its grip. The Figure peered into

Mathias, consuming meager facets of his

personality and memories. It's inquiries ran

rampant as it unintentionally extracted

information, such as images, sounds and even

emotions. This placed an excruciating strain on

Mathias as he fought to remain conscious

'Fucking Hell!' He mentally shrieked, his mind

sweltering as the reverberating static

drowned out his thoughts.

Having taken more energy than it needed

the figure released its grip on Mathias; and

beneath its obscuring cloak the figure took

form, drawing inspiration from some of the

humans within Mathias's memories.

"Can you understand me?" A soft feminine

voice asked.

When the soft feminine voice

reached Mathias, the reverberating static faded,

like morning mist before the rising sun.

"Y-yes!"

He replied his mind hazy, an after effect

from the static. At least that's what Mathias

concluded. However it was actually

because the Godly figure devoured parts of his

soul. The haze made it possible for him to

forget about the mind splitting agony he had

just experienced. Mathias looked to the

shrouded figure as it lowered its hood, revealing

its appearance.

From beneath the hood came pouring long

locks of deep auburn; like embers, one touch

and they may reignite lingering flames best left

to smolder. It took on a feminine appearance,

one that complimented her petite frame… and

one Mathias found most attractive.

Her eyes were an enchanting shade of

golden yellow, as if the sun itself resided in

her iris'. Eyes so mesmerizing they beckoned

to be gazed at, however like the golden sun,

one might go blind if glaring for to long.

her complexion lacked imperfection as if

made from porcelain, with a skin tone of a

perfectly ripened peach.

"This is what it feels like to have form! It's

been so long I had forgotten." She

exclaimed running her fingertips through the

ends of her auburn hair

Mathias couldn't believe his eyes, from

beneath the ragged grey cloak hid a beauty

He could only describe as: Divine!

'Calling her gorgeous seems like an injustice…

no! An insult!!' He thought, unable to look away

from her. Taking a break from admiring her new

appearance, the godly figure looked to Mathias

"I'm elated beyond words! I must know, to

whom is it, that shall receive my gratitude?"

The way she spoke reminded Mathias of

archaic tales, when kings and lords ruled

over lands. In the moment he related as a

common subject receiving praise from a

Queen.

"Mathias Emmit, ma'am."

He courteously answered. From the information

the godly figured took, Mathias' name wasn't

included.

"Mathias Emmit… hmmm, yes." She

whispered to herself, "Tell me Mathias

Emmit do you know how you came to be

here?"

There was a brief moment of silence between them as Mathias contemplated his response

"Begging your pardon, but where I'm from

it's bad manners asking for someone's

name without offering your own.." he replied

The women paused… tried as she might, she couldn't recall her own name. She had

been stuck in this endless darkness for so

long she no longer distinguished herself

apart from the dark.

"That's because I don't have one to give."

She replied smugly.

Mathias didn't believe the women's claim

'Fine, play it that way' He thought feeling

challenged

"Gotta call you something, if you won't give

me your name."

The women shifted her crafty gaze to their

surroundings. All there was to see… was

black. She began recalling information she

pulled from Mathias' memories.

Where he was from there was a different language than Mathias' mother tongue, and in that language there was word for black: Noir.

With a smug smirk the women gave Mathias

a name to call her.

"You may call me: Noir"


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