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A slight alteration is said to change the entire future. What if Harry wasn't the last of his house??
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This was a great chapter. Perhaps you should add the background of Andrew Charlus Potter, like where he attended school, personality, and what magic he is good at. Including his associates. I hope you include details from beyond Britain's magical society, such as the species their, and what other magical societies in different countries are there. You should add pictures for what the characters in the story look like.
Please do read and send me any reviews regarding how you liked the plot and the chapter. I do not consider myself an expert as I have just started writing this fic. Please any constructive reviews are welcome.😊