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Climbing to Supremacy with a Chat Group
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Amar an ordinary 19 year old boy with some anger issues encounters a very desperate situation. In his desperation he unlocks his innate power and that starts a series of events that lead to him climbing a path that can grant him supremacy.
A/N: English is not my first language but I will try my best to prevent any grammatical errors that I see. I am particularly bad at punctuations so yeah. Anyway this is my first fanfic so if you have any ideas to make it better then put them in the comments I will try to address them.
P.S. The cover is not mine.
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Probably one of the better group chat fics, i just hope it continues on ............................................................................................................................
Stopped at chapter 11 or 12 . The main love interest is Freya from danmachi the romance between Freya and mc is so forced, the mc is the reincarnation of her lover/husband yes this Freya is a AU idk why if you are going to make her au just choose another love interest , After I read this I decided I would not like to read this fanfic any longer. But good luck with this fanfic
Pretty good fic and i love how he uses a spear tbh not many authors do that for their stories Unfortunately I'm not into Freya so i had to leave the story here
Ngl when it said he acquired the yandere law that’s when I dropped this, this whole thing of a novel took a really weird turn that it’s just not as good as it was before
I seriously don't know how to write a proper review so I will just list out whatever I didn't like. As for what I like in this fic I don't need to write I guess because many would write positives so here I go : 1)Let's go with system first-> he was basically given free achievements which he did not even do a thing to get and was given because somehow his body got strengthened by energy and system did not consider this as anomaly. 2) drastic difference in personalities of characters from their normal counterparts .like how could a goddess and godslayer witch who basically lived for thousands of years show no caution or vigilance when they were given system and rewards and then there is gift scáthach sent to MC ,if she can send basic combat why can't she send her advanced combat techniques and why would she even gift him, like for no apparent reason. when they were told their lives were part of fiction they took it like "ok, interesting i guess" .then there is rewards for chat group, every member got a reward which basically screams OP and we have our mc with unneeded gamers body(due to his potential as some successor to someone op)and useless gamers mind (which fails because he is apostle of wrath) . if there is more then I don't remember it. ***above review is my own opinion on the fic so I am not gonna rub it on anyone who disagrees with me .👍
Story would be great if the author didn’t bother with romance. I rarely say this to authors because you can write what you want. but I just have to. Stop writing romance. It’s actually painful to read. Freya is bareable due to that weird reincarnation thing where he isn’t even the ‘reincarnated’ guy she loved (btw isn’t that a form of SA? False identity r4p3 or something?) and the compete override of her actual character…yeah, Scathach was an abomination. Not even friendship would start like that. Sorry if this offends, I had no other words to express my extreme disappointment. Everything else written is great and then the romance ruins it all. :(
Reveal Spoiler Since it's been two months and the newest chapter tilted me, it's review time baby. Quality of writing: (SPAG) is 5/5. Good quality and structure that lets the story flow in speech, monologue and narration, so good job. Updates: again 5/5 (shouldn't have to explain this right?) Development: i'm giving a three simply because it just pauses to add some meaningless info that holts progression of the narrative for no reason...yeah, that's that. Character design: 2 just because of the new chapter. MC goes from nervous and has standards, beliefs, and morals... to a complete 180, i guess, half-'chad' just to make a business deal with Scathach the author is calling a 'relationship'. Biggest BRUH of fan-fiction i've seen in about 2 years. I admit, i was excited and built some small expectations to see a real developed Scathach romance instead of the usual. "Teach me/I'll teach you" proceeds to seggs because she's Scottish (Woohoo to my Celtic ancestors) and it ends up being. " I like you like a man liked women." "Okay, I don't know what love is but yes." (Okay, she's 2000 years old... and depending on depiction has a husband and daughter) then proceeds to bath naked and sleep together (no seggs tho) Yeah, so character design went from 4/5 with the Freya interactions and Hestia maturity to a hugely disappointing 2. World background: 4/5 ... I mean you can't really mess this up in a fan-fiction unless the author is illiterate. Solid 4/5.
This is one of the few good chat group fanfics it is going well so far just wish there were more uploads but other than that this fanfic is great.
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I recommend the author to read these fics ( Annihilation Maker DXD ) as a reference, and one of the best chat group, because chat group is very difficult to write, most authors abandon, not being able to merge the worlds and putting so much harem that it becomes boring .
I really like it, of course there were moments when it was debatable (in my personal experience), for example, how the stingray "rushed" at him so quickly, although in my experience the author will most likely explain later why, or changes in the canon (although, after Freya, this doesn't stand out much)
Muy buena la historia sigue así en realidad es muy buena la historia no lo vayas a dejar abandonada la historia es muy buena sigue así 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Like every other shameless author let me shamelessly review my book and give it 5 stars as well. Try it out if you like overpowered protagonist and chat group fics. I don't know if you will like it or not, because it depends on person to person if they like something or not. The harem has already been decided and will not change from now on. It will consist of 4 women that have already been selected, since apparently having 3 women doesn't qualify for a harem. I hope the way I build my world is alright, I don't like to do a lot of exposition dumps like some other authors because it gets tiring to read that. Anyway all the best to any new readers who want to read this. Hopefully you will enjoy it, some parts are cliche and cringe in the beginning so just read past that I guess.