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Chapter 31: Sample and asking for advice because idk where to go from here and would like some feedback...

[Murderer! Monster! Butcher! psychopath! Sociopath!] Exu's dreams have not been pleasant... She keeps seeing the faces of everyone she killed and being called these things repeatedly.

Exu walks over to the bathroom, looks at her reflection in the mirror growls, motions to punch it only to powerlessly let it all go, and proceeds to brush her teeth, which she hasn't done in weeks.

'Where do I go from here?' Exu undresses and turns the shower on after half an hour she dries herself off and dresses herself then plops onto the couch to watch some Anime.

Exu opens her scroll and sees lots of missed calls and texts...

: Exusiai where are you?:

: Please call me... I'm sorry for everything!:

: I made a pumpkin Pie... I figured I'd save it for you...:

'I hate pumpkins, Yang Well you didn't know that...' Exu reads all of Yang's texts and looks at the clock.

"She should be in class right now... I'll wait... I'll just leave a text for now" Exu presses the play button and continues watching Overlord season 2 after sending a very awkward text that makes Ruby look like the one that isn't socially awkward.

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Yang hears a blip on her scroll and sees a text from Exusiai bringing tears to her eyes she wipes them and focuses back on her class feeling much better and more hopeful. She couldn't help but chuckle a little at the bit about saying she hates pumpkins and to make an apple pie instead.

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This is a sample I thought up... Not sure if I should have our little Exu reconnect with her family immediately or just gradually reconnect over time... Any advice would be appreciated!

Honestly having such a close shave with death himself is bound to change anyone including my version of Exusiai... She is currently going through a life crisis not knowing what to do... Similar to a mid-life crisis but I guess... Different?

Leave me your thoughts on where to go from here... because honestly I don't know where to go from here and would like you all to bounce some ideas around for me... Will totally give you credit at the beginning of the new chapter posting your profile name... With your permission.


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