Funny and crazy mafia organization

Good effort. I like the story concept, its quite interesting. But, I like you to put moe effort in sentence making. Overall, I like the story

This was your nice attempt. But not so good. Kindly work on it. This are very little use of words. Use some more the amount of the words. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]