I have read a bit and I really have to say that I am positively surprised and impressed. Still, there are little things that could have been done differently, such as several paragraphs and not all in one go. As I said, when I finish reading it, I'll give you my completely honest opinion and don't worry, it will be 100% positive. Your novel alone is better than 90% of the webnovels right now, because many here are not really good, but your novel has made a VERY GOOD start, so keep it up!
I have read a bit and I really have to say that I am positively surprised and impressed. Still, there are little things that could have been done differently, such as several paragraphs and not all in one go. As I said, when I finish reading it, I'll give you my completely honest opinion and don't worry, it will be 100% positive. Your novel alone is better than 90% of the webnovels right now, because many here are not really good, but your novel has made a VERY GOOD start, so keep it up!