Rimuru Tempest-An OP-SI Fanfic

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Santiago_69

Nice tensura fanfic[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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ThunderWolf_God

I like the story so far however I have a suggestion of making this rimuru look and talk like a true male and not the fanboy the original was if you know what I mean like give him veldora's physic with the blue hair and yellow eyes then everything else would be your direction of how you the author would make it on your own time I do like the cover photo but he could use some more muscle to not look like a toothpick.

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RedRest0

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